Dreams— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答直接且能表达意思，但语言不够自然，有语法错误与冗余。建议：1) 避免重复（例如同时说“sometimes”与“can”即可），2) 使用更自然的时态和搭配（比如“tell my dreams to”应改为“tell my family and friends about my dreams”），3) 控制长度不超过三句，保持流畅。练习时多用简单句并注意介词搭配。

예시: Yes, I can remember some of my dreams, and I sometimes tell my family and friends about them.

제안: 内容有意义但表达混乱且语法错误较多。建议：1) 明确回答（Yes/No）并紧接原因，2) 注意动词和介词搭配（例如“share dreams with someone”，“interested in someone’s dreams”），3) 避免双重否定与不必要重复，4) 用连接词（because, but）使逻辑清晰。

예시: No, I usually don't share my dreams because I believe talking about them might prevent them from coming true. However, I am sometimes interested in my friends' dreams and enjoy hearing about their ideas.

제안: 回答观点明确但表达不够清晰且有代词错误。建议：1) 用更自然的句子解释原因，避免笼统表述，2) 注意代词与主语的一致性（用“they”或“a person”代替“he”），3) 提供具体例子或解释来支撑观点。

예시: Yes, I do. I believe dreams can give people motivation and a sense of purpose, for example, pursuing a career goal can help someone stay focused and energized.

제안: 回答含义明确但语法与表达不准确，有双重否定和冗余。建议：1) 用直接肯定句并说明原因，2) 避免双重否定（例如“不想”与“没有人”），3) 加入具体计划或情感细节使回答更丰富和可信。

예시: Yes, I do. I would be very happy if my dreams came true, and I'm willing to work hard by setting goals and taking small steps to achieve them.

× Yes, sometimes I can and I will tell my dreams to my family and my friends.

✓ Yes, sometimes I can, and I tell my dreams to my family and my friends.

原句中“sometimes”表示习惯性或经常发生的动作，应使用一般现在时，而不应混用将来时“will”。建议把“will tell”改为一般现在时“tell”。此外在“can”和“and”之间加逗号以提高可读性。

× No I don't because I think when I share my dreams to others the dreams can't come true.

✓ No, I don't because I think when I share my dreams with others, the dreams can't come true.

动词“share”后面正确的介词是“with”，表示与某人分享，而不是“to”。另外在句首和从句前需要加逗号以便分隔句子成分。

× Sometimes I interested in other streams such as my friend's dreams but others I don't interested in.

✓ Sometimes I am interested in other dreams, such as my friend's dreams, but in other cases I am not interested.

原句缺少be动词“am”，应使用一般现在时态“am interested”。“streams”应为“dreams”（拼写错误且语义不符）。句尾短语用法不当，改为“in other cases I am not interested”更清晰。

× Yes I do. I think when people have their own dream, he will have the power to live in.

✓ Yes, I do. I think when people have their own dreams, they will have the power to live.

句中主语是复数“people”，因此代词应使用复数“they”而不是单数“he”。同时“dream”应为复数“dreams”以与“people”对应；短语“the power to live in”不自然，改为“the power to live”。

× Yes I do. I think no person don't want their dreams come true and if my dreams can come true I will feel so happy.

✓ Yes, I do. I think no one doesn't want their dreams to come true, and if my dreams can come true, I will feel very happy.

原句存在多重问题：首先“双重否定”不合逻辑且表达混乱，应该避免“no person don't”；应改为“no one wants their dreams not to come true”或更自然的肯定表达。其次，“dreams come true”作不定式时应为“to come true”。句中“so happy”可改为更正式的“very happy”。句子也需要逗号来分隔条件状语从句。