Dreams— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clearer and more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, correct grammar (e.g., 'they are scary', 'busy'), reduce fillers ('uh', 'umm'), and use one or two supporting details with linking words. Also correct word choice and sentence structure.

예시: Yes, I sometimes remember my dreams, especially when they are scary. For example, after watching a horror movie I often have bad dreams that night. Also, if I am under a lot of pressure before an important exam, I tend to dream about it because I worry a lot.

제안: Respond directly and fix grammatical errors and vocabulary ('who was in the dream', 'sometimes'). Use a topic sentence and two concise supporting reasons with linking words for coherence.

예시: Yes, I sometimes share my dreams with friends, especially if someone I know appeared in the dream. I do this because it lightens the mood and, moreover, strange details often spark entertaining conversations.

제안: Make the main idea clear: state your opinion, then give a clear reason and example. Correct grammar (plural/singular, 'dreams have', 'they reflect', avoid repetition like 'I will might'). Use linking words like 'for example' and 'however' properly.

예시: Yes, I think dreams can have meaning because they often reflect things we have been thinking about during the day. For example, if I feel stressed about an exam, I might dream that I fail. However, I don't believe dreams literally predict the future; they usually show our worries and memories.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence, fix word choice ('passing my IELTS exam'), verb forms and conditionals, and avoid vague phrases. Use one concrete detail about how you are working toward the goal.

예시: Yes, I definitely want my dreams to come true. For example, I am hoping to pass my IELTS exam, which is one of the most important goals in my life. If I pass, I will be able to continue my studies abroad, so I am currently studying English every day and taking practice tests.

× Yes, I occasionally remember the dreams, especially when they scary.

✓ Yes, I occasionally remember dreams, especially when they are scary.

Missing verb 'are' to link subject 'they' with adjective 'scary'; also 'the dreams' is unnecessary general article. Use 'they are scary' for correct adjective use and sentence structure. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 13)

× For example, after I watch a horror movie, I usually have bad dreams on that day.

✓ For example, after I watch a horror movie, I usually have bad dreams that day.

The phrase 'on that day' is awkward; 'that day' is more natural to refer to the same day. Tense is present-simple for habitual action, which is appropriate; adjust wording for fluency. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 6)

× Or I tend to, uh, dream when I have a lot of pressure for busing an important exam.

✓ Or I tend to, uh, dream when I have a lot of pressure because of an important exam.

Wrong phrase 'busing an important exam' is unclear; use 'because of' + noun phrase 'an important exam'. Also 'pressure' collocates with 'because of' or 'from'. Ensure correct preposition use and noun form. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 8)

× Umm, because dear and I, I pay a lot.

✓ Umm, because I care a lot and feel responsible.

Original sentence is unclear and has pronoun/word errors ('dear and I' makes no sense). Replace with clear subject 'I' and verbs that express meaning. This fixes incorrect pronoun usage and sentence clarity. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 12)

× Yes, I occasionally share the story with people, especially if that person what in the dream with.

✓ Yes, I occasionally share the story with people, especially if that person was in the dream with me.

Missing verb 'was' and incorrect word order 'what in the dream with'. Correct structure is 'was in the dream with me' or 'was in my dream'. This fixes pronoun reference and verb usage. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 12)

× And I usually tell the story to make the conversations more relaxed and amusing.

✓ I usually tell the story to make the conversation more relaxed and amusing.

Plural 'conversations' is possible but singular 'the conversation' is more natural when referring to the immediate interaction; adjust article and number for natural phrasing. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 13)

× And sometime the strange details spark a fun discussion.

✓ And sometimes the strange details spark a fun discussion.

Typo 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. Present-simple 'spark' is correct for habitual or general truth. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 6)

× Yes, I think dream has special meaning at because it's perplexed of things that we had been thinking about during the day.

✓ Yes, I think dreams have special meaning because they reflect things we have been thinking about during the day.

Multiple issues: use plural 'dreams' with plural verb 'have' (subject-verb agreement), remove extraneous 'at', replace 'perplexed of' with 'reflect' for correct meaning, and use present perfect progressive 'have been thinking' to show ongoing past influence. This addresses adjective/adverb misuse and agreement. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 13)

× For example, if I'm, uh, stressed about an exam, I will might I might dream of failing it.

✓ For example, if I'm stressed about an exam, I might dream of failing it.

Redundant modals 'will might I might' are incorrect. Use a single modal 'might' to express possibility. Keep conditional present for realistic possibility. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 4)

× However, I don't think dream literally predict the future.

✓ However, I don't think dreams literally predict the future.

Use plural 'dreams' to match plural verb 'predict' and ensure subject-verb agreement. Alternatively, use 'a dream' with singular verb. This fixes pronoun/noun number. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 12)

× They're more oppression or worries and memories.

✓ They're more like expressions of worries and memories.

Wrong word 'oppression' and incorrect structure. 'More like expressions of worries and memories' conveys intended meaning; use noun phrases that fit context. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 13)

× Yes, I definitely hope my dreams could come true.

✓ Yes, I definitely hope my dreams can come true.

'Could' suggests conditional ability; 'can' is more natural to express possibility/desire for realization. Use appropriate modal to match meaning. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 4)

× For example, I've been dreaming of buzzing my IL exam which one of the most important exams in my life.

✓ For example, I've been dreaming of passing my IELTS exam, which is one of the most important exams in my life.

Multiple errors: 'buzzing' wrong verb — use 'passing'; 'IL exam' unclear — likely 'IELTS exam'; missing relative verb 'is' after 'which'; use present perfect continuous 'I've been dreaming' is fine. Corrects vocabulary and sentence structure. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 5)

× If this dream come true, I would be able to return to study.

✓ If this dream comes true, I will be able to return to my studies.

Conditional structure: use present 'comes' in the 'if' clause for real future possibility, and 'will' in main clause. Also 'return to study' should be 'return to my studies' for natural phrasing. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 26)

× I hope I can achieve this goal soon.

✓ I hope I can achieve this goal soon.

Sentence is correct; present tense 'hope' with modal 'can' is appropriate to express desire for future achievement. No change needed. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 6)