Dreams— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and grammatical: give a clear topic sentence, then a brief reason or example. Avoid tense and phrasing errors (use present perfect/simple where appropriate) and keep it concise (max 3–4 sentences). Add a linking word to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I can remember some dreams clearly, but not all of them. For example, I sometimes wake up remembering a vivid scene, whereas other times I only know I dreamed without recalling the details.

제안: Clarify meaning and correct grammar. State a clear stance, give a short reason, and avoid unclear phrases. Use linking words for coherence and choose correct verb forms and vocabulary (e.g., "I used to" + verb, "a myth" not "one of myth").

예시: I usually don't share my dreams because I once heard a myth that telling dreams can bring bad luck. Therefore, although I used to tell close friends, now I prefer to keep my dreams to myself.

제안: Use correct tense and subject-verb agreement. Start with a clear opinion, then support it with a brief reason or example. Use a linking word (e.g., "because" or "so") to connect clauses.

예시: Yes, I believe dreams can have special meanings because some psychologists and researchers study them professionally. For instance, certain dreams might reflect people’s worries or desires.

제안: Answer directly with clear conditionals and correct grammar. Use linking words ("if... then..., but...") and give a brief example to clarify what you mean by "struggle situations." Keep sentences concise and natural.

예시: It depends on the dream. If the dream is about being rich or happy, then I would like it to come true, but if it involves hardship or danger, I definitely would not want it to happen.

× Sometimes I clearly remember, but sometimes I knew I had a dream but I totally forgot the story.

✓ Sometimes I clearly remember them, but sometimes I know I had a dream and I totally forget the story.

The student mixed past and present tenses. Use present simple for habitual or general statements about memory: 'I clearly remember' and 'I know I had a dream' (or 'I know I had dreams'). Also change 'forgot' to 'forget' to keep present reference. Additionally, 'them' clarifies reference to dreams.

× Normally I don't share the dreams with others.

✓ Normally I don't share dreams with others.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before a plural noun when speaking generally. Use 'share dreams' for general statements.

× I used to share it but I heard one of myth.

✓ I used to share them but I heard a myth.

'Used to' is correct for past habit, but pronoun and article were wrong. 'Dreams' is plural so use 'them'. 'One of myth' is ungrammatical—use 'a myth' or 'one myth'.

× It's not really good. Maybe they gonna take your luck or they gonna bring me unlock to you.

✓ People say it's not good. Maybe it will take your luck or bring bad luck to you.

'Gonna' is informal and ungrammatical in writing; use 'will'. Pronouns were unclear: 'they' should be 'it' or 'it will' referring to the myth, and 'bring me unlock to you' is incorrect—intended meaning is 'bring bad luck to you'.

× I think dreams had special meanings, that's why I think some people is professionally researching about that.

✓ I think dreams have special meanings; that's why I think some people are conducting professional research about them.

Use present tense 'have' for a current belief. 'Some people is' should be 'some people are' (subject-verb agreement). 'Professionally researching about that' is awkward; use 'conducting professional research about them' or 'researching them professionally'.

× Depends on dreams, if I'm being rich or I'm happy I hope the dream can be true.

✓ It depends on the dream: if I'm rich or happy, I hope the dream can come true.

'Depends on dreams' needs a subject 'It depends on the dream'. 'I'm being rich' is unnatural; use 'I'm rich'. 'Can be true' is less natural than 'can come true' or 'comes true'.

× But if I mean struggle situation I don't want to be the dream became true.

✓ But if I mean a difficult situation, I don't want the dream to become true.

The original sentence has word order and verb form errors. Use 'mean a difficult situation' or 'mean a struggle', and 'I don't want the dream to become true' uses the infinitive 'to become' correctly instead of 'became' (past tense).