Dreams— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 答えは明確ですが、冗長な表現や文法の誤りがあります。短く直接的なトピック文を使い、続けて一つの具体例や理由を加えると良いです。例えば時制の一致や冠詞の使い方（a dream / dreams）に注意し、不要な繰り返し（"dreams" を連続で言う等）を避けましょう。

예시: I usually can't remember my dreams. I tend to forget them as soon as I wake up, so I rarely recall any specific dream.

제안: 内容は伝わりますが、文法と結束性が弱いです。接続詞を使って理由と対比をはっきり示し、細部を具体化すると自然になります。また代名詞や語順の間違い（"others dreams"→"others' dreams", "It's they are"→不要）を直しましょう。

예시: I don't usually share my dreams because I often forget them. However, I'm interested in other people's dreams because some of them are so strange or funny that I enjoy hearing about them.

제안: 答えの意図はわかりますが、文法的に混乱しており、論理の流れが弱いです。まず明確なトピック文を示し、理由を一つの整った文で述べ、必要なら簡単な例を付け加えてください。否定形と助動詞の扱いに注意しましょう。

예시: No, I don't think dreams have special meanings. I believe they are just a way for the brain to process recent memories and emotions, not messages with hidden significance.

제안: 肯定は良いですが文法の誤りと不完全な文があります。目標を明確に述べ、そのために何をしているかを一文で結びましょう。冠詞や動詞の形（"my dream is to work"）と句の結合に注意してください。

예시: Yes, definitely. My dream is to work for an international company, so I am practicing English and gaining relevant skills to improve my chances.

× No, I can't. I tend to forget dreams immediately, so I cannot recall the dream that I had.

✓ No, I can't. I tend to forget dreams immediately, so I cannot recall the dreams I had.

The student used 'the dream that I had' which is grammatically correct but inconsistent with 'dreams' earlier; use plural 'dreams I had' to match 'dreams' and present tense habit. Also omit the relative pronoun 'that' for natural speech. Suggestion: keep plurality consistent and prefer concise phrasing.

× No, I don't share my dreams because I usually forget my dreams. However, I'm interested in others dreams because sometimes. It's they are ridiculous.

✓ No, I don't share my dreams because I usually forget them. However, I'm interested in other people's dreams sometimes because they can be ridiculous.

Errors: 'others dreams' needs possessive form 'other people's dreams'; repeating 'dreams' is redundant so use pronoun 'them'; 'because sometimes.' is fragmentary and word order 'It's they are ridiculous' is ungrammatical. Also add modal 'can be' for naturalness. Suggestion: use possessive for others, replace repeated nouns with pronouns, combine clauses to avoid fragments.

× No, I don't think dream. Dreams have not don't have special meaning because I just say it. Just organize their memories.

✓ No, I don't think dreams have any special meaning. I think they just help organize memories.

Original contains multiple structural errors: 'I don't think dream' lacks object; 'Dreams have not don't have' is contradictory and ungrammatical; 'I just say it' is unclear; 'Just organize their memories' lacks subject. Correction combines intended ideas: negate special meaning and state function of dreams. Suggestion: use clear subject-verb structures and avoid double negatives.

× Yes, of course, because my dreams is that working for international company and for that I. Practice English now.

✓ Yes, of course, because my dream is to work for an international company, and for that I am practicing English now.

Errors: 'my dreams is' mixes plural subject with singular verb — use singular 'dream'. 'that working for international company' should be an infinitive 'to work' and needs an article 'an international company'. 'for that I. Practice English now' has punctuation and tense issues; use 'and for that I am practicing English now'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement, use infinitive forms for goals, include articles, and use continuous tense for ongoing actions.