Dreams— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be careful with grammar (plural/singular and subject-verb agreement) and word choice. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct errors, and add one specific example to support your statement. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and use a linking word to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I can remember some of my dreams, especially when they are interesting or emotional. For example, last week I dreamed I was flying over my hometown, which felt very vivid and joyful. However, I usually forget most dreams soon after I wake up.

제안: Improve coherence and punctuation; avoid run-on sentences and be precise with names and references. Use a linking word to contrast general habit and exceptions, and provide one short example of a dream you shared to make it specific.

예시: I usually don't share my dreams with others because most of them don't make much sense. However, if I have a really funny or vivid dream, I will tell my close family or friends. For instance, I once dreamed about being chased by giant pandas and my sister laughed a lot when I described it.

제안: Correct word-choice and spelling errors (e.g., 'team' -> 'dream', 'brand' -> 'brain') and expand slightly with a linking phrase to give a clear opinion and reason. Provide a specific example of a type of dream that could reflect feelings.

예시: I'm not sure they all have special meanings. I think some dreams may reflect your thoughts or feelings; for example, dreaming about failing an exam might show anxiety about real tests. But I don't believe every dream has a hidden message; often the brain is just processing recent memories and experiences.

제안: Minor grammar and word-form corrections (e.g., 'dedications' -> 'dedication') and add a brief plan or steps to show determination and specificity. Keep it natural and concise with one linking word to connect goal and effort.

예시: Yes, I do. I want to become a doctor, which is my main goal, and I know it will take a lot of hard work and dedication. Therefore, I am preparing by studying biology carefully and volunteering at a local clinic to gain experience.

× Yes I can, I usually remember my dream if they're interested or emotional, but I forget most of them soon after I wake up.

✓ Yes I can. I usually remember my dreams if they're interesting or emotional, but I forget most of them soon after I wake up.

Pronoun and noun agreement: 'dream' should be plural 'dreams' to match 'most of them'. 'they're interested' is incorrect because 'they' refers to dreams and 'interested' describes people; use 'interesting' to describe dreams. Also sentence punctuation: separate with a period for clarity.

× I usually don't share my dreams with other people because most of them don't make much sense. However, if I had a really interesting or funny dream, I'll tell my family or close friends like Parks and Kim also like hearing about other people's dreams because they're often surprising.

✓ I usually don't share my dreams with other people because most of them don't make much sense. However, if I have a really interesting or funny dream, I'll tell my family or close friends. Parks and Kim also like hearing about other people's dreams because they're often surprising.

Tense consistency and sentence structure: 'if I had' suggests unreal past; the context is a real future possibility, so use present tense 'if I have'. The original also fused two sentences wrongly; split into two sentences and capitalize 'Parks' to correct structure.

× I'm not sure. I think some dreams may reflect on your thoughts and or feelings, but I don't believe every team has a special meaning.

✓ I'm not sure. I think some dreams may reflect your thoughts and feelings, but I don't believe every dream has a special meaning.

Word choice and pronoun consistency: 'reflect on your thoughts and or feelings' is awkward; use 'reflect your thoughts and feelings'. 'team' is a typo for 'dream'. Remove 'or' when using 'and' and 'your' keeps perspective consistent.

× Most of the time they're probably just the brand processing memories and experiences.

✓ Most of the time they're probably just the brain processing memories and experiences.

Spelling error: 'brand' should be 'brain'. This is a simple lexical mistake; correct spelling fixes the meaning.

× Yes I do. I have a few dreams that I would like to achieve, especially becoming a doctor.

✓ Yes I do. I have a few dreams that I would like to achieve, especially becoming a doctor.

No grammatical correction needed for this sentence; usage of 'a few' and 'becoming' is appropriate. Included here only to confirm it's correct.

× I know it will take a lot of hard work and dedications, but I'm willing to do my best to make it come true.

✓ I know it will take a lot of hard work and dedication, but I'm willing to do my best to make it come true.

Word form: 'dedications' should be the uncountable noun 'dedication'. Use singular uncountable form with 'a lot of' to be grammatically correct.