Dreams— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ваш ответ непонятен и содержит грамматические ошибки. Сформулируйте короткое прямое предложение, скажите, помните ли вы сны, затем при необходимости добавьте одно-два уточняющих предложения. Используйте правильные формы глаголов и простую лексику, избегайте лишних слов.

예시: No, I usually can’t remember my dreams. I often wake up without any clear images, so the details disappear quickly. Sometimes I remember a fragment, but it fades after a few minutes.

제안: Ответ непоследователен и содержит повторы и ошибки. Дайте чёткий ответ (да/нет + причина), используйте связующие слова (for example, because, especially) и приведите конкретный пример или ситуацию.

예시: Yes, I am interested in other people's dreams because they can reveal personal concerns or creativity. For example, my friend often tells me her dreams and we discuss what they might mean.

제안: Хорошая идея ответа и попытка привести причину и пример, но предложения нарушены грамматически и пример неясен. Постройте предложение: тема + причина с соединителем + конкретный пример, используя правильные формы существительных и глаголов.

예시: Yes, I think dreams can have special meanings because they often reflect subconscious feelings or worries. For example, if I dream about buying a new car, it might mean I want more freedom or that I am thinking a lot about my future plans.

제안: Ответ общие и содержит повторения. Сначала ясно ответьте «да» или «нет», затем объясните мотив и добавьте краткий план действий или пример, избегая повтора слова «dream» слишком часто.

예시: Yes, I want to make my dreams come true because they motivate me to improve my life. For instance, I am saving money to buy a new car and I plan to work extra hours to reach that goal.

× No I can't. I want I don't watch dream but when I sleep I immigration situation.

✓ No, I can't. I don't remember my dreams, but sometimes when I sleep I have strange experiences.

The sentence contains incorrect pronoun use and unclear phrases. 'I want I don't watch dream' is ungrammatical; replace with 'I don't remember my dreams' to convey inability to recall. 'I immigration situation' is meaningless; likely intended 'I have strange experiences' or 'I have vivid dreams.' Use appropriate verbs and pronouns and keep a clear subject-verb-object structure.

× I'm interested in others dreams because it's so interesting, knows all the streams and I think then then. Especially people know.

✓ I'm interested in other people's dreams because they're interesting, and I like hearing about them.

Errors: 'others dreams' should be 'other people's dreams' (possessive). 'it's so interesting' should agree with plural 'dreams' -> 'they're interesting.' Phrases 'knows all the streams' and 'I think then then. Especially people know.' are unclear and ungrammatical; simplify to 'I like hearing about them.' Use correct possessive pronoun and subject-verb agreement.

× Yes, I think dreams can have special meanings because they often reflect your subconscious feelings and the worries.

✓ Yes, I think dreams can have special meanings because they often reflect your subconscious feelings and worries.

The phrase 'the worries' is incorrect here; use plural uncountable noun 'worries' without the definite article. Also keep parallel structure 'feelings and worries.' Remove unnecessary 'the.'

× For example, if I dream about new car in my dreams to be.

✓ For example, if I dream about a new car, it feels real to me.

Original is incomplete and ungrammatical. Need article 'a' before 'new car' (article error). 'In my dreams to be' is meaningless; replace with a complete clause like 'it feels real to me' to convey intended meaning. Ensure subject and verb are present.

× If I want to make my dreams come true, I think everybody wants make their dreams come true.

✓ If I want to make my dreams come true, I think everyone wants to make their dreams come true.

Missing 'to' in 'wants make' — use infinitive 'to make.' Also 'everybody' can be 'everyone'; ensure verb form after 'wants' is 'to make.' Maintain parallel structure.

× Because my dream is it new car and I want a new car.

✓ Because my dream is a new car, and I want a new car.

Remove extraneous pronoun 'it' which is incorrect here. Insert article 'a' before 'new car.' Maintain simple noun phrase: 'my dream is a new car.'

× It's my dream and dream it's easy dream.

✓ It's my dream, and it's an easy dream.

Original repeats 'dream' awkwardly and lacks articles. Use 'it's an easy dream' with the article 'an' before the adjective-noun phrase. Keep clear and concise sentence structure.