Dreams— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 用更自然、准确的表达并改善语法与句子连贯性。回答要有主题句并用一到两句具体细节，避免重复。可以把职业按时间顺序简洁列出，并用连词衔接。

예시: Yes, I can remember my childhood dreams. At first I wanted to become a psychologist, then I considered becoming a teacher, and later I thought about being a doctor, so my ambitions changed quite quickly.

제안: 改善语法（动词形式和介词使用），用更简洁的句子并加入连接词以增强连贯性。可以给出具体例子说明别人如何帮助你或一次分享的经历。

예시: Yes, I often share my dreams with my parents and close friends because they give me useful advice. For example, my mother helped me research psychology programs when I decided to become a psychologist.

제안: 避免重复表达并修正语法错误，使用连接词提高逻辑性，同时给出具体说明或例子说明“意义”如何影响行为或性格。

예시: Yes, I believe dreams are meaningful because they often reflect a person's ambitions and values. For instance, someone who dreams of helping others may develop a caring personality and choose a related career.

제안: 可以更直接地用一到两句说明为实现梦想正在做的具体行动，增加说服力和细节，例如学习计划或实践经验。注意句子流畅性。

예시: Definitely. I want to be a psychologist, so I am studying psychology at university and doing volunteer work at a counselling center to gain practical experience.

× I wanted be a psychological consider at the beginning and then I wanted to be a teacher and I wanted be a doctor.

✓ I wanted to be a psychologist at the beginning, and then I wanted to be a teacher and I wanted to be a doctor.

句中缺少不定式 'to'，正确结构为 'want(ed) to do'。另外 'psychological consider' 是词汇和词序错误，应为名词 'psychologist'（心理学家）。建议记住动词 want 后面接不定式（to + 动词原形），并注意名词词形和拼写。

× My dream was change changed quickly.

✓ My dreams changed quickly.

原句时态和结构混乱。应使用过去式 'changed' 表示过去的变化，并将 'dream' 用复数与前文一致或改为 'my dream changed quickly'。不应重复 'change changed'。建议用简单过去时表达过去发生的事情。

× I would like to share my dreams with my friends and my parents because they can give me a lot of suggestions and I also interested in my friends dreams because they are my close friends, we have very good relationships.

✓ I would like to share my dreams with my friends and my parents because they can give me a lot of suggestions, and I am also interested in my friends' dreams because they are my close friends; we have very good relationships.

短语 'interested in' 需要系动词 'be'（此处为 'am'）。此外 'friends dreams' 应加所有格 'friends'。建议在表达兴趣时使用 'be interested in'，并注意所有格和标点使句子更清晰。

× I also interested in my friends dreams

✓ I am also interested in my friends' dreams

缺少系动词 'am'，且 'friends dreams' 缺少所有格标记，应为 'friends' dreams'。虽然主要是动词缺失，但也涉及名词所有格的介词/结构使用。建议使用 'be interested in' 结构并在名词所有格处加撇号。

× On one hand it can reflect one's ambition and also I think dreams can affect one's character.

✓ On one hand, it can reflect one's ambitions, and I also think dreams can affect one's character.

原句总体正确，但 'ambition' 在此处更自然用复数 'ambitions' 表示各种志向；添加逗号使句子更平衡。此处并非严格语法错误，但调整有助于表达清晰。

× It can means what they want to in the future and they will try to achieve it.

✓ It can mean what they want to do in the future, and they will try to achieve it.

动词 'can' 后应接动词原形 'mean'（不能加 -s）。此外短语 'want to' 需要后接动词，故用 'want to do'。建议牢记情态动词后用动词原形，并在 'want to' 后补完整动词。

× Definitely, I think everyone wants their dreams come true and I want to be a psychologist now, so I will try my best to achieve my dream.

✓ Definitely, I think everyone wants their dreams to come true, and I want to be a psychologist now, so I will try my best to achieve my dream.

动词短语 'want ... to do' 中缺少 'to'，应为 'wants their dreams to come true'。建议掌握 'want somebody/something to do' 结构，补上不定式 'to'。