Dreams— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and use clearer tenses and vocabulary. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition (e.g., "when I wake up" vs "when I woke up") and filler sounds. Use linking words like "but" and "however" correctly.

예시: Yes, I usually remember my dreams. For example, once I dreamed I was on a date with a handsome man; I can't recall his face, but I clearly remember the relaxed atmosphere and our conversation.

제안: Give a direct answer, then add one clear reason and a short example. Remove hesitations and correct grammar (e.g., "there are many" not "there is so many"). Use linking words such as "because" and "so" properly.

예시: Yes, I do. I find dreams fascinating because they often reflect my imagination or aspects of real life, so I enjoy sharing them. For instance, I recently told a friend about a vivid dream that revealed my worries before an exam.

제안: Answer directly and use clearer conditional phrasing. Avoid filler words and tighten sentences. Explain briefly when you think a dream is meaningful and what you do next, using linking words like "if" and "so".

예시: Sometimes. If a dream feels unusually vivid or emotional, I think it might have meaning, so I often look up possible interpretations online to better understand it.

제안: Provide a direct, polite answer and explain why with specific detail. Avoid slang or censored words; use appropriate vocabulary (e.g., "panic" or "be frightened"). Keep it to one or two sentences and a brief reason.

예시: No, not really. I often have frightening nightmares, so if they actually happened I would be very frightened and worried.

× I dated with some handsome guy in the dream and when I wake up I really don't remember his face but I remember that atmosphere and the chatting.

✓ I was dating a handsome guy in the dream, and when I woke up I really didn't remember his face, but I remembered the atmosphere and the conversation.

The original uses 'dated with' which is unnatural; 'date' in continuous past should be 'was dating'. Also tense consistency: the dream occurred in the past so use past tenses ('woke up', 'didn't remember', 'remembered'). 'the chatting' is unidiomatic; use 'the conversation'. Use commas to separate clauses for clarity.

× Yes, because in dream there is so many uh, amazing things appear and also uh, I believe that dreams reflect our own imagination or the real life.

✓ Yes, because in dreams there are so many amazing things that appear, and I also believe that dreams reflect our imagination or real life.

Use plural 'dreams' when speaking generally. 'There is so many' is incorrect for plural; use 'there are so many'. Include 'that' to connect 'things that appear'. 'the real life' is wrong; use 'real life' without the definite article.

× So I really enjoy to listen and tell the dream about it.

✓ So I really enjoy listening to and telling dreams about them.

After 'enjoy' use the -ing form ('listening'), not 'to listen'. 'Tell the dream about it' is awkward; better: 'telling dreams about them' or 'telling someone about my dreams'. Also adjust pronouns for clarity.

× It depends when I woke up, uh, it is uh, sometimes I feel oh, this dream is special, but sometimes oh, it's just a dream.

✓ It depends on how I feel when I wake up: sometimes I think, 'Oh, this dream is special,' but sometimes it's just a dream.

Tense and phrasing: 'It depends when I woke up' mixes tenses. Use present habitual 'depends on how I feel when I wake up'. Use 'think' instead of 'feel' for judging a dream. Punctuation and reporting of thoughts improves clarity.

× So when I feel that special, I real, I usually search about the meanings.

✓ So when I feel that it is special, I usually search for the meanings.

Use 'feel that it is special' for clarity. 'I real' is incorrect — likely meant 'I really', but unnecessary. Use 'search for' rather than 'search about' when looking up meanings.

× No, I usually have a lot of scary dreams. It feels like the nightmare, so if the dreams come true, I'm gonna ****** out.

✓ No, I usually have a lot of scary dreams. They feel like nightmares, so if the dreams came true, I would freak out.

'It feels like the nightmare' should be plural 'They feel like nightmares'. 'I'm gonna ****** out' is colloquial and censored; use conditional 'if the dreams came true, I would freak out' to match hypothetical meaning. Use 'would' for unreal present/future conditional.