Dreams— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Сформулируйте ответ более понятно и логично: начните с короткого прямого предложения, затем добавьте конкретные детали и избегайте смешения двух значений слова "dream" (мечта и сновидение). Уменьшите повторения и исправьте грамматические ошибки (например, "I have one dream" → "I have had one dream since childhood", "I'm going to the stream" некорректно — вероятно, вы имели в виду "I would go to sea" или "I would do whatever it takes").

예시: Yes, I can remember them. Since childhood I have had one dream: to become wealthy and have an exciting career as a sailor. I would go to sea and work hard to achieve that goal, taking any opportunity to gain experience.

제안: Сделайте ответ более сжатым и уточняющим: используйте связующие слова для связности и исправьте местоимения (he → they). Уточните с кем именно и почему вы делитесь мечтами, приведите пример темы разговора. Избегайте повторов вроде "So yes, my answer is yes."

예시: Yes, I often share my dreams with my friends because we enjoy discussing our goals and life plans. For example, we talk about career choices and how to achieve them, and I value their feedback and encouragement.

제안: Уточните, что вы имеете в виду под "special meanings" и используйте более естественные формулировки: избегайте прямого перевода с русского ("with a point", "make you to think"). Дайте конкретный пример сна или объясните, как именно сон влияет на мысли или решения. Старайтесь сохранять 2–4 предложения.

예시: Yes, I think dreams can have meaning. For instance, a recurring dream about failing an exam might reflect anxiety about performance and push you to prepare more carefully. Sometimes dreams recall important memories and make you reflect on your feelings.

제안: Разделите понятия "сон" и "мечта" и ответьте чётко: сначала коротко про сновидения, затем про жизненные мечты. Избегайте запинок и повторов; используйте связку "however" или "but" для контраста. Переформулируйте бессвязные фразы ("I always dream about my dream" → "I always try to pursue my goals").

예시: If you mean sleeping dreams, I don't always want them to come true because some are nightmares. But if you mean life goals, absolutely — I work hard and take steps to try to achieve my dreams, such as gaining relevant experience and saving money.

× Since childhood I have one dream to become a wealthy man with a great job, and my dream job was a sailor, so I'm going to the stream and doing whatever it takes.

✓ Since childhood I have had one dream: to become a wealthy man with a great job, and my dream job was to be a sailor, so I'm going to pursue it and do whatever it takes.

The original sentence has several verb and noun form issues. 'I have one dream' should be 'I have had one dream' to indicate a continuing desire since childhood (present perfect). 'My dream job was a sailor' is incorrect because 'job' should be followed by an infinitive role phrase: 'to be a sailor.' 'I'm going to the stream' is likely a misuse of 'stream' for 'strike out' or 'pursue' — corrected to 'I'm going to pursue it' to express intent. Suggestion: use present perfect for ongoing states from the past to present, use 'to be' after 'job was', and choose correct verbs to express pursuing a dream.

× We like to talk about them. I'm interested what he thinks about life and dreams, and he's interested in my dreams as well.

✓ We like to talk about them. I'm interested in what he thinks about life and dreams, and he's interested in my dreams as well.

Missing preposition 'in' after 'interested'. The phrase should be 'interested in what he thinks'. Suggestion: remember the common collocation 'interested in' when expressing interest.

× So yes, my answer is yes.

✓ So yes, my answer is yes.

This sentence is repetitive but not grammatically incorrect per the listed types. No change necessary. If stylistic improvement desired: 'So yes, it is.' but this is beyond the requested types.

× In my opinion, yes, Because sometimes you see dreams with a point.

✓ In my opinion, yes, because sometimes you see dreams with a point.

Capitalization error after a comma: 'Because' should be lowercase. This falls under conjunction usage and punctuation; conjunctions should not be capitalized mid-sentence. Suggestion: use lowercase 'because' after a comma.

× They make you to think about something.

✓ They make you think about something.

After causative verb 'make' the following verb should be base form, not 'to' infinitive. Remove 'to'. Suggestion: use 'make someone do something', not 'make someone to do'.

× If we are talking about dreams when we are asleep, then sometime yes, sometimes no, because there are nightmares and also there are good dreams.

✓ If we are talking about dreams when we are asleep, then sometimes yes, sometimes no, because there are nightmares and also there are good dreams.

Typo 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. Suggestion: use 'sometimes' for 'occasionally'.

× Good dreams, of course nightmares Nah.

✓ Good dreams, of course — not nightmares.

Fragmented and unclear sentence. 'Nah' is informal and non-standard in this context. Rewritten to contrast 'good dreams' with 'nightmares' and to use a clear negation. Suggestion: avoid filler words and use clear conjunctions or punctuation.

× But if you talking about another dream, I always, I always dream about my dream.

✓ But if you are talking about another kind of dream, I always, I always dream about my dream.

Missing auxiliary 'are' for present continuous: should be 'if you are talking'. Also 'another dream' unclear; 'another kind of dream' is clearer. Repetition 'I always, I always' kept as spoken emphasis. Suggestion: include auxiliary verbs in continuous constructions and clarify nouns.