Mirrors— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Reduce repetition and correct grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you like looking in the mirror, then give 1–2 concise supporting details (what you check and how often). Use correct verb forms and natural frequency expressions. Avoid filler words and repeated phrases.

예시: Yes, I do. I usually check my hair, clothes and braces before I leave the house. I look in the mirror several times a day, especially in the morning and before going out.

제안: Use correct past tense and be concise. Begin with a direct answer (Yes/No), then give specific details about what you have and where they are. Avoid repeating the same information.

예시: No, I haven't bought any mirrors myself. I have two small handheld mirrors and a large wall mirror in the bathroom that came with the house.

제안: Answer directly and explain reasons briefly and clearly. Use natural phrasing for habits (usually/rarely) and avoid awkward adjectives. Provide one example of when you do check your appearance.

예시: No, I don't usually carry a mirror because it's bulky and inconvenient. I do, however, check my appearance quickly in shop windows or public restrooms before meeting people.

제안: Give a clear yes/no, then explain specific reasons and how you would use a mirror in the room. Use clearer vocabulary (decorate, enhance, reflect light) and avoid vague phrases. Mention one concrete design idea or placement.

예시: Yes, I would. A large mirror would make my room look bigger and brighter, so I would place a full-length mirror near the wardrobe and add a decorative frame to match my furniture.

× Yes, I like to see myself in in the mirror 'cause I whenever I look in the mirror, I see my reflection.

✓ Yes, I like to see myself in the mirror because whenever I look in the mirror I see my reflection.

Repeated word 'in' and colloquial ''cause' are informal; remove duplicate preposition and use 'because' for clarity. Also remove extra comma before 'I see' to maintain correct sentence flow.

× Whenever I look at the mirror, I set myself, I set my hair and my brace.

✓ Whenever I look in the mirror, I fix my hair and my braces.

Use 'look in the mirror' (common collocation). 'Set myself' is unnatural; use 'fix' or 'adjust'. 'Brace' likely intended 'braces' (plural) or 'accessory'; correct to 'braces' and plural form for accuracy.

× I check quickly, I check my outfit also and I look oftenly in the mirror, like, yeah, 24 to 5:00.

✓ I quickly check my outfit and I often look in the mirror, like, yeah, 24/7.

Adverb placement: 'quickly' should come before the verb 'check'. 'Also' moved for natural order. 'Oftenly' is incorrect; use 'often'. Time expression '24 to 5:00' is wrong; likely meant '24/7' for 'all the time'.

× No, I did not bought any mirrors before, but I have quite two or three mirrors, like small mirrors and also a big mirror in my washroom.

✓ No, I did not buy any mirrors before, but I have about two or three small mirrors and also a big mirror in my washroom.

After 'did not' use the base form 'buy', not past 'bought'. Use 'about' instead of 'quite' for approximate quantity; specify 'small mirrors' and correct article usage.

× And also, yeah, I have quite two to three mirrors in my house, Yeah.

✓ And also, yeah, I have about two or three mirrors in my house.

'Quite' is not used with numeric ranges like 'two to three'; use 'about' or 'two or three'. Remove duplicate 'Yeah' for conciseness.

× No, no no, I don't take usually mirror with my with me because I think it's quite the hassle It's and also a very bad to carry or like it's very uncomfortable to carry.

✓ No, I don't usually take a mirror with me because I think it's quite a hassle and very uncomfortable to carry.

Adverb 'usually' should come before the verb 'take'. Use 'a mirror' with article. Remove redundancy and fix word order: 'quite a hassle' and 'very uncomfortable to carry' are natural phrases.

× But whenever I go outside I check myself quickly at the mirror to see that I am always looking good.

✓ But whenever I go outside I quickly check myself in the mirror to make sure I am always looking good.

Use 'in the mirror' not 'at the mirror' for checking appearance. 'Check myself quickly' sounds better with adverb before verb. Use 'make sure' instead of 'to see that' for natural phrasing.

× Well, right now I do not have any mirror in my room but if I have to decorate my room, I'd like to to represent my room or like to increase the beauty of my room.

✓ Well, right now I do not have any mirror in my room but if I had to decorate my room, I'd like to use a mirror to enhance the look of my room.

Use 'any mirror' acceptable but 'have to' with hypothetical should be 'had to'. Remove duplicated 'to'. 'Represent my room' is odd; use 'enhance the look' or 'increase the beauty'. Also 'use a mirror' is natural.

× Yes, I will use a mirror in my room because a mirror is also a part of my every life.

✓ Yes, I would use a mirror in my room because a mirror is also a part of my everyday life.

Context is hypothetical so 'would' fits. 'Every life' is incorrect; use compound adjective 'everyday' to mean 'daily'.

× So I would style it in my from my design and also in.

✓ So I would style it according to my design and personal taste.

Original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Style it according to my design and personal taste' is a clear, complete way to express the idea.