Mirrors— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., "get my ready" / "get myself ready").

예시: Yes, I do. I check myself in the mirror every morning to do my hair and make sure my clothes are neat before leaving the house. I usually spend a few minutes fixing my hair and checking for any stains so I look presentable at work.

제안: Provide a clear, grammatical topic sentence and one specific detail explaining when and why you bought the mirror. Use past tense consistently and avoid hesitations/repetition.

예시: Yes, I bought a mirror when I moved out of my hometown last year. I needed a full-length mirror for my new apartment so I could check outfits before going out.

제안: Clarify vocabulary (meter → mirror) and make sentences concise. Start with a direct response, then add one or two specific examples and use linking words like "but" or "so" correctly.

예시: Not usually, but I sometimes bring a small mirror when I'm meeting friends or going to a special event. Alternatively, I quickly check my reflection in shop windows or use my phone camera to make sure I'm presentable for photos.

제안: Correct pronunciation/spelling errors (millers → mirrors) and give clearer, specific placement ideas. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid unclear fragments (e.g., "praise 1 opposite dimmer the wing").

예시: Yes, I would. Mirrors reflect natural light and make a room feel brighter and more spacious. For example, I would place one opposite a window to bounce light around the room and use a large wall mirror to create an airy atmosphere.

× Yes I do. I look at myself in the mirror every morning to get my ready, get myself ready and then check my outfit before leaving the house.

✓ Yes, I do. I look at myself in the mirror every morning to get myself ready and then check my outfit before leaving the house.

Redundant and incorrect phrase 'get my ready' should be 'get myself ready'. Use a comma after 'Yes' for natural speech punctuation. Remove duplicate phrase 'get myself ready' to avoid repetition.

× Yes, I have bought it once when I move out, moved out my hometown could and I need it, I need it, needed it when I started new life.

✓ Yes, I bought one when I moved out of my hometown because I needed it when I started my new life.

Mixes present perfect and simple past incorrectly. 'Have bought it once when I move out' should be simple past 'bought' and 'moved out' must agree in past tense. 'Could' is incorrect here; likely intended 'because'. Use 'one' for countable 'mirror'. Include articles ('my new life' -> 'my new life' changed to 'my new life' corrected to 'my new life' and added 'my' before hometown). Correction uses past tense consistently and proper conjunction.

× I don't usually carry a meter when I go out, but I do bring one if I'm meeting friends or attending a special event.

✓ I don't usually carry a mirror when I go out, but I do bring one if I'm meeting friends or attending a special event.

The word 'meter' is a wrong lexical choice for 'mirror'. Replace with the correct countable noun 'mirror'. The rest of the sentence is fine.

× I like to check my appearance quickly, either in a shop window or with my phone camera, so I look prefer presentable for photos or important occasions.

✓ I like to check my appearance quickly, either in a shop window or with my phone camera, so I look presentable for photos or important occasions.

Phrase 'look prefer presentable' is ungrammatical: 'prefer' is unnecessary and misused. Remove 'prefer' to produce 'look presentable'. The sentence then correctly uses adjective 'presentable' after verb 'look'.

× Yes I would. Millers reflect natural light from windows and help brighten our room making it feel more spacious.

✓ Yes, I would. Mirrors reflect natural light from windows and help brighten a room, making it feel more spacious.

'Millers' is a misspelling; correct word is 'mirrors'. 'Our room' implies ownership not specified by question; 'a room' is more natural. Add comma before 'making' to join clauses. Also add comma after 'Yes'.

× I might praise 1 opposite dimmer the wing, one opposite the window, or use a large wall meter to create a more often airy atmosphere.

✓ I might place one opposite the door, one opposite the window, or use a large wall mirror to create a more airy atmosphere.

Original has many errors: 'praise' should be 'place', '1' should be 'one', 'dimmer the wing' is unintelligible and likely 'door', 'meter' should be 'mirror', and 'more often airy' is incorrect collocation; use 'more airy' or 'airier'. The correction fixes word choice, article use, and word order to make a clear sentence.