Mirrors— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be careful with grammar and clarity. Begin with a clear topic sentence, correct subject-verb agreement and word choice (e.g. 'appearance' not 'parents'), and avoid repetition. Keep it within 2–4 sentences and use a linking word when adding extra detail.

예시: Yes, I do. I check my appearance in the mirror several times a day, especially before I leave the house, because it boosts my confidence. I usually use the mirror in my bathroom or bedroom depending on where I’m getting ready.

제안: Start with a complete topic sentence and avoid missing auxiliary verbs. Add a specific reason or detail and use a linking word for coherence. Keep it concise and correct small grammar slips.

예시: Yes, I have. Recently I bought a full-length mirror for my room so I can check my outfit from head to toe before going out, which saves me time in the morning.

제안: Fix incorrect phrases and word choices (e.g. 'check my appearance' not 'check up my parents') and singular/plural consistency. Use one clear sentence for the main idea and one for supporting detail, connected with a linking word.

예시: Yes, I usually carry a small compact mirror in my bag so I can check my appearance during the day. For example, I use it to touch up my makeup or hair before meetings or social events.

제안: Good content and clear reasons. Improve subject-verb agreement (e.g. 'helps' not 'help') and avoid minor repetition. Use a linking word to connect ideas and give one concrete example of placement or style.

예시: Yes, I do. I use mirrors to decorate my room because they make the space look larger and help brighten it by reflecting natural light. For instance, placing a large mirror opposite the window creates a brighter, more spacious feel.

× Yes I do, I check my mirror several times a day, especially before I leave my room because it helps to boost my confidence and helps me make sure my parents is neat.

✓ Yes, I do. I check my mirror several times a day, especially before I leave my room because it helps to boost my confidence and helps me make sure my parents are neat.

The verb must agree with the plural noun 'parents'. 'Parents' is plural so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Also the original sentence combined clauses with commas; splitting into two sentences improves clarity. Suggestion: ensure verbs match singular/plural subjects and punctuate complex sentences into clearer clauses.

× I usually use the mirror in my bathroom and bedroom and one in the bedroom depending on where I'm getting ready.

✓ I usually use the mirrors in my bathroom and bedroom, depending on where I'm getting ready.

The sentence refers to more than one mirror (in bathroom and bedroom), so the plural 'mirrors' is appropriate. Also 'and one in the bedroom' is redundant. Suggestion: use plural nouns when referring to multiple items and remove redundant phrases.

× Yes, I have bought mirrors before. Recently bought a full length mirror for my room so I can easily check my appearance and get the rest before going out.

✓ Yes, I have bought mirrors before. I recently bought a full-length mirror for my room so I can easily check my appearance and get ready before going out.

The second sentence omitted the subject 'I' and used 'get the rest' which is incorrect; 'get ready' is the correct phrase. Maintaining past simple 'bought' is fine because the action is completed. Suggestion: include the subject and choose correct collocations ('get ready').

× Recently bought a full length mirror for my room so I can easily check my appearance and get the rest before going out.

✓ I recently bought a full-length mirror for my room so I can easily check my appearance and get ready before going out.

The original fragment lacks the subject 'I' before 'recently bought', making it a sentence without a main verb for the subject. Adding the subject and correcting 'get the rest' to 'get ready' fixes form and meaning. Suggestion: always include an explicit subject in independent clauses.

× Yes, I usually carry mirror before going out so I can check up my parents for full day.

✓ Yes, I usually carry a mirror before going out so I can check up on my appearance during the day.

The noun 'mirror' needs an article 'a'. The phrase 'check up my parents for full day' is incorrect in meaning and structure. Likely intended is 'check up on my appearance' and 'during the day'. Suggestion: use appropriate articles before singular countable nouns and use correct prepositions and collocations ('check up on', 'during the day').

× I keep a small compact mirror in my bags so that I can touch up before going to the meetings or any social event.

✓ I keep a small compact mirror in my bag so that I can touch up before going to meetings or any social event.

Use singular 'bag' if carrying one; 'bags' suggests multiple. 'Going to the meetings' is unnatural; 'going to meetings' or 'going to a meeting' is correct. Also 'touch up' is transitive when referring to appearance but can be used without object here. Suggestion: choose correct prepositions/articles and match singular/plural nouns to the context.

× Yes, I do use mirrors to decorate my rooms because it makes the space look larger and help brighten the room by reflecting light.

✓ Yes, I do use mirrors to decorate my room because they make the space look larger and help brighten the room by reflecting light.

If referring to the room being decorated, use singular 'room' or if plural 'rooms' then pronouns and verbs must match. Here 'mirrors' is plural so use plural pronoun 'they' and plural verbs 'make' and 'help'. Also ensure subject 'room'/'rooms' agreement. Suggestion: keep noun number consistent and make verbs/pronouns agree with plural subjects.

× They also improve the overall appearance, making the room look more stylish and modern.

✓ They also improve the overall appearance, making the room look more stylish and modern.

This sentence is grammatically correct. 'They' (mirrors) matches the plural verb 'improve'. No correction needed. Explanation: plural subject 'they' requires plural verb form; the sentence already follows this rule. Suggestion: none.