Mirrors— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Correct grammar (verb forms, articles, and word order) and avoid redundancy.

예시: Not really. I don't look at myself in the mirror very often because I'm usually busy reading or working. When I do check the mirror, it's only to fix my hair quickly before leaving the house.

제안: Answer directly, then provide specific details about the mirrors (size, purpose, when you use them). Use clear sentences and link ideas with words like 'so' or 'because'. Avoid fillers and repetitions.

예시: Yes, I have. I bought a small pocket mirror that I carry when I go out, and a full-length mirror at home so I can check my outfit from head to toe.

제안: Provide a clear topic sentence and one or two specific reasons. Fix grammar (articles, prepositions, verb forms) and make the purpose precise. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' correctly.

예시: Yes, I usually carry a small mirror in my bag because sometimes I need to check my hair or touch up my makeup before an appointment.

제안: Start with a clear direct answer, then briefly explain why with specific reasons. Avoid hesitations and repeated words. Use correct sentence structure and small linking phrases such as 'because' or 'as'.

예시: No, I wouldn't use mirrors for decoration. I only have them for practical reasons — to check my outfit and fix my makeup — so decorative mirrors are unnecessary for me.

× I'm not like look at myself in the mirror frequently because I have another things to do.

✓ I don't like looking at myself in the mirror frequently because I have other things to do.

The sentence uses incorrect verb and pronoun forms: 'I'm not like look' is ungrammatical. This is a subject-verb/modal error and pronoun phrase issue; replace 'I'm not like look' with 'I don't like looking' (use do-support + base verb for negative, and verb + -ing for 'like' followed by activity). 'another things' is incorrect plural agreement; use 'other things'. Suggestion: use 'I don't like looking' and 'other things' to match plural nouns.

× I have all I have to read a book and do my job so it will spend.

✓ I have things to do: I have to read a book and do my job, so it takes my time.

The original mixes tenses and uses 'it will spend' incorrectly. Use present simple 'I have to read' for obligations and 'it takes my time' to express that these activities occupy time. Also clarify 'all I have' to 'things to do'. Suggestion: separate ideas with a colon or conjunction and use correct present tense verbs.

× Yes, I have uh, I bought a small one.

✓ Yes, I have. I bought a small one.

The sentence is understandable but punctuation/structure is awkward. Use either present perfect 'I have bought' or simple past 'I bought' consistently. Keeping 'I bought a small one' is correct for a completed action; add a full stop after 'I have' if you mean 'I have' as affirmation. Suggestion: choose one tense and punctuate clearly.

× I can carry it all the time when I go out and I have a big one can I can uh looking me in the mirror whole whole body so I can.

✓ I can carry the small one all the time when I go out, and I have a big one so I can see my whole body in the mirror.

Multiple problems: 'looking me in the mirror' is wrong pronoun and verb order; use 'see myself' or 'see my whole body'. 'whole whole body' is repetition. The phrase 'can I can uh' is disfluent; simplify to 'so I can see my whole body'. Suggestion: use 'see myself' for mirror-reflection and remove repetitions.

× Yes I do, I always take a mirror with me.

✓ Yes, I do. I always take a mirror with me.

This sentence is largely correct; only punctuation needed. 'Yes, I do' properly answers the question and 'always take' is correct present habit. Suggestion: add a comma after 'Yes' and separate clauses with a period for clarity.

× I put a small one in my pocket in my bag because I sometimes I need to check my hair is under my makeup when I have a appointment.

✓ I put a small one in my pocket or in my bag because sometimes I need to check my hair and my makeup when I have an appointment.

Problems: 'in my pocket in my bag' should be 'in my pocket or in my bag' to indicate alternatives. 'I sometimes I need' has an extra subject; remove duplication. 'check my hair is under my makeup' is incorrect structure — likely means 'check my hair and my makeup' or 'check that my hair is under control and my makeup is okay'. Use 'an appointment' not 'a appointment' (article error). Suggestion: streamline sentence, remove duplicate subject, and use correct article 'an' before vowel sound.

× No I wouldn't.

✓ No, I wouldn't.

This short answer is acceptable as a polite refusal. Add a comma after 'No' for natural spoken punctuation. Suggestion: Keep 'I wouldn't' to express conditional or preference.

× I just use mirrors to to check my what what will I wear and the makeup what I should make up when I go out.

✓ I just use mirrors to check what I will wear and how I should do my makeup when I go out.

Many issues: repeated words 'to to' and 'what what' are disfluencies; reorder clause 'what will I wear' to statement form 'what I will wear'. 'the makeup what I should make up' is incorrect; use 'how I should do my makeup' or 'what makeup I should put on'. Suggestion: remove repetitions, use correct word order for reported content, and use 'do my makeup'.

× I don't need them.

✓ I don't need them.

This sentence is grammatically correct as a short response referring to mirrors. No change needed apart from punctuation if desired. Suggestion: it's fine as is.