Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Overall this answer is natural and relevant. To improve, remove filler words (e.g., "Uh"), make the opening a clear topic sentence, and add one brief specific detail to enrich the response (for example, mention a favorite place you rode or a memory). Keep the answer within 3–4 sentences and use a linking phrase if adding a detail (e.g., "I especially liked..." or "One memory is...").

예시: Yes — I had a bike from about four or five years old. My dad bought a pastel pink one for me, and I loved riding it around my neighborhood. I especially enjoyed cycling to the small park near our house, where I learned to ride without training wheels.

제안: The answer addresses the question but has several language and word-choice errors that affect clarity (e.g., "short commit," "convinced," "circling"). To improve, use accurate vocabulary ("short commutes", "convenient", "cycling"), start with a direct topic sentence, and add one specific supporting detail or statistic. Use a linking word like "because" or "for example" correctly. Keep it to 2–3 concise sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular, especially in cities where people use them for short commutes because they are cheap and convenient. For example, many students and office workers cycle to work or university to avoid traffic and save money on transport.

× Bicycles are quite popular, especially in cities when people use them for short commit because they're cheap and convinced.

✓ Bicycles are quite popular, especially in cities when people use them for short commutes because they're cheap and convenient.

The sentence contains incorrect word choice and preposition/word form errors. 'commit' is the wrong word; the noun should be 'commute' (or plural 'commutes') to refer to short trips to work or school. 'Convinced' is the wrong adjective; the intended meaning is that bicycles are suitable or practical, so 'convenient' is correct. Also, 'for short commutes' is the correct collocation. Suggestion: use 'commute/commutes' for the noun meaning travel and 'convenient' to describe suitability. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× For example, many students and office workers prefer circling to avoid traffic and save money on transport.

✓ For example, many students and office workers prefer cycling to avoid traffic and save money on transport.

The verb 'circling' is incorrect in this context; the correct gerund for riding a bicycle is 'cycling'. Using 'circling' changes the meaning and makes the sentence ungrammatical. This is a verb choice error that affects sentence structure. Suggestion: replace with 'cycling' to convey riding a bicycle. This keeps the gerund form consistent with 'prefer' + verb-ing. Grammar problem type ID: 8