Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar and make the answer more natural and slightly longer (no more than 5 sentences). Start with a clear topic sentence using the past tense, then add one or two specific supporting details (where you rode it, who you rode with, or a memory). Use linking words if adding details.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood every afternoon with my friends, and sometimes my father would take me to the park to practice tricks. It was a red bicycle with a small basket, which I loved because I could carry my toys in it.

제안: Make your opinion direct and support it with specific, coherent reasons using clearer linking words. Avoid filler sounds (uh) and repetitive phrases. Begin with a clear topic sentence (I don't think bikes are popular), then give one or two concrete reasons (traffic, infrastructure, weather, culture) and, if possible, a brief example or comparison.

예시: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because the roads are often crowded and there is little cycling infrastructure, which makes riding dangerous. For example, most streets lack bike lanes and drivers seldom give cyclists enough space, so many people prefer motorcycles or cars instead.

× Yes, I have bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

Issues: (1) Singular and plural/article: 'bike' needs the indefinite article 'a' for a singular countable noun. (2) Past tense: The question asks about the past ('when you were a child'), so the verb should be past tense 'had' rather than present 'have'. Correction: use 'had a bike'. Suggestion: For past experiences use past simple (I had) and include articles for singular countable nouns (a/an).

× I don't think so as the bike, uh, is actually very dangerous when, uh, they, when it's on the road.

✓ I don't think so because bikes are actually very dangerous when they are on the road.

Issues: (1) Incorrect use of article/number and subject-verb agreement: 'the bike' suggests a specific singular bike, but the sentence refers to bikes in general so plural 'bikes' is appropriate; correspondingly use plural verb 'are'. (2) Pronoun reference: 'they' must agree with the plural noun 'bikes' and match the verb form ('they are' not 'it's'). (3) Conjunction choice: 'because' is clearer than 'as' in spoken explanatory statements. Suggestion: When speaking about general statements, use plural nouns and matching plural verbs and pronouns (bikes ... they are). Also remove filler 'uh' for clarity.