Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise, avoid filler words and repetition, and give a brief supporting detail or emotion. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using a linking word. For example, explain briefly why your father couldn't teach you or how you felt about it.

예시: Yes, I had a bike as a child, but I never learned to ride it. Because my father was often busy with work, he couldn’t teach me properly, so I felt frustrated and mostly walked or took the bus instead.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence then support it with two specific reasons linked logically. Reduce hesitation words and use varied vocabulary (e.g., 'common', 'infrastructure', 'unsafe'). Optionally add a brief example or prediction to enrich the answer.

예시: No, bikes are not very popular in my country. Mainly people prefer cars because they are more convenient for long distances, and the cycling infrastructure is poor, with few bike lanes, so riding in the city feels unsafe.

× I couldn't use it 'cause, uh, my dad couldn't teach me how to ride a bike and I wasn't, I guess, talented enough to learn how to ride a bike.

✓ I couldn't use it because my dad couldn't teach me how to ride a bike and I wasn't, I guess, talented enough to learn.

The original sentence repeats 'how to ride a bike' unnecessarily and uses informal 'cause. This is not a past participle error but fits best as a clarity/editing correction under 'Verb in the past participle form' per your list; the verb forms are otherwise correct. Removed the repetition for conciseness and replaced 'cause with 'because' for formal grammar. Suggestion: avoid repetition and use full conjunctions in formal responses.

× People tend to use their personal cars, uh, because it's easier to get around the city.

✓ People tend to use their personal cars because it's easier to get around the city.

The sentence contained filler 'uh' which is disfluent rather than a preposition error; removing it yields a grammatically correct sentence. The preposition 'around' is correct. Suggestion: avoid filler words when answering to be clearer and more formal.

× Plus, uh, the roads are not fully equipped and fully designed for bike riders, so it's not safe to get around the city with your bike.

✓ Plus, the roads are not fully equipped or designed for bike riders, so it's not safe to get around the city by bike.

Using both 'fully equipped and fully designed' is redundant; use 'equipped or designed' to show either condition. 'With your bike' is less natural than 'by bike.' Removed filler 'uh.' Suggestion: avoid redundancy and prefer natural prepositional phrases like 'by bike.'