Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is direct and natural but very brief. To improve, add one or two specific supporting details (where you rode it, who taught you, or a memorable moment) and use a linking word to connect ideas. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and avoid fillers like “uh.”

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a kid. I often rode it around my neighborhood park after school, and my older brother taught me to balance on two wheels. Because of that practice, I became confident riding on busy streets later.

제안: Your response answers the question but contains hesitation, repetition, grammar errors and vague phrasing. To improve, remove fillers, correct subject-verb agreement, use linking words (for example, however, because), and include a specific reason or example (e.g., commuting, exercise, parks). Keep it concise (2–4 sentences).

예시: Yes, biking is very popular in my country. For example, many people cycle in parks or on dedicated lanes in the evenings to exercise, but relatively few ride bikes in the morning because of heavy traffic and work schedules.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a kid.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a kid.

No grammar correction needed. Sentence correctly uses past simple to describe possession in childhood. Keep as is.

× Yeah, uh, in my country, a lot of people love to do cycling around the garden, uh, in their free time, mostly in the evenings.

✓ Yeah, uh, in my country, a lot of people enjoy cycling around the park in their free time, mostly in the evenings.

Original uses 'love to do cycling', which is awkward because 'do cycling' is not a common collocation. This is a present-tense habit, so use present simple 'enjoy' or 'love' plus the gerund 'cycling'. Also 'garden' likely refers to a public park; 'park' is more natural. Suggestion: use 'enjoy cycling' instead of 'love to do cycling' for natural phrasing.

× Uh, I've seen that not many people likes to drive a bike at morning, but yeah, uh, biking is very popular.

✓ Uh, I've seen that not many people like to ride bikes in the morning, but yeah, biking is very popular.

There are several issues that match the present tense and subject-verb agreement rules: 'likes' is incorrect because the subject 'not many people' is plural, so the verb should be 'like' (present simple). 'Drive a bike' is unnatural; use 'ride a bike' or 'ride bikes'. 'At morning' is incorrect preposition and article use; use 'in the morning'. The corrected sentence uses present perfect progressive context 'I've seen' followed by a present simple generalization 'not many people like', and improves verb choice and preposition.