Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly in past tense, use a clear topic sentence, and add one brief supporting detail. Keep it natural and grammatically correct (max 5 sentences). For example, use linking words like "but" or "however" if adding contrast. Avoid mixing tenses.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family lived in a small apartment and we usually walked or took public transport, so there wasn’t space to store a bike. However, I sometimes borrowed my friend’s bike to ride in the park.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence, then give specific reasons using coherent linking words (e.g., "because", "so", "therefore"). Use correct grammar and smoother phrasing, and provide one concrete example or statistic if possible. Keep it concise (no more than 5 sentences).

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient. For many commuters, especially migrants working in cities, bikes are a cheap way to travel short distances. As a result, you often see crowded streets filled with bicycles during rush hour.

× No, I don't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present simple ('don't have') with a past time reference ('when I was a child'). Use past simple 'didn't have' for actions or states in the past. Suggestion: keep past tense for the whole sentence when referring to childhood (e.g., 'I didn't have a bike when I was a child').

× Yes bike.

✓ Yes, bikes are.

This fragment lacks proper sentence structure and agreement with the question. The examiner asked 'Do you think bikes are popular...?' A correct short answer should be 'Yes, they are' or a short sentence like 'Yes, bikes are popular.' Suggestion: answer full sentence 'Yes, bikes are popular in my country.' or use 'Yes, they are.'

× I think bikes are popular in migrant trip because a lot of people doing job and they want to buy a bike.

✓ I think bikes are popular among migrants because many people travel for work and want to buy a bike.

'in migrant trip' is ungrammatical. Use 'among migrants' or 'for migrant workers'. Also 'a lot of people doing job' lacks auxiliary and correct noun form; use 'many people travel for work' or 'many people work away from home.' Ensure verbs include proper tense or auxiliary: 'doing job' should be 'are working' or rephrased. Suggestion: use 'among migrants' and 'many people travel for work' to convey meaning clearly.

× ...because a lot of people doing job and they want to buy a bike.

✓ ...because many people are working and they want to buy a bike.

The clause 'a lot of people doing job' omits the auxiliary 'are' required before the present participle 'doing.' Also 'job' as a noun is awkward here; 'working' or 'have jobs' is clearer. Suggestion: use 'are working' or reword to 'work' depending on meaning.

× Bike doesn't cost you much much as cars so people want to buy bike.

✓ Bikes don't cost as much as cars, so people want to buy them.

Several errors: singular 'Bike' vs plural 'cars' causes agreement issue; use plural 'Bikes' with plural verb 'don't.' The comparative structure should be 'cost as much as' not 'cost you much much as.' Also 'buy bike' needs an article or plural: 'buy them' or 'buy a bike.' Suggestion: use 'Bikes don't cost as much as cars, so people want to buy them.'