Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be careful with pronunciation and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct mistakes (e.g. "bike" not "bite"), and then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it concise (no more than 4–5 short sentences).

예시: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small red bike when I was about five, and I learned to ride it in the park near our house. Because it had training wheels at first, I felt safe while I practiced, and by the time I was seven I could ride without them.

제안: Improve grammar, sentence structure and clarity. Begin with a clear statement, then give specific reasons or examples connected with linking words (e.g. "because", "for example"). Avoid vague phrases and finish the sentence. Keep answers natural and concise.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people use bicycles to commute to work because they are inexpensive and avoid traffic. In addition, cycling is common among students and older people for short trips.

× Yes, definitely. I have a bite. I had a bike when I was a child. When I was about 5 years old, my father bought a bike for me. That's uh.

✓ Yes, definitely. I had a bike. When I was about five years old, my father bought a bike for me.

The original contains a likely word choice/spelling error 'I have a bite' which should be 'I had a bike' to match past tense and meaning; this fits sentence structure errors (ID 26). Also remove the filler 'That's uh.' which is incomplete. Suggestion: use correct vocabulary ('bike'), keep consistent past tense for past experiences, and avoid unfinished fragments.

× Yes, I definitely, I'm sure about that. The bike are very popular in my country every some people like age to work because it's very comfortable and.

✓ Yes, I'm sure about that. Bikes are very popular in my country; many people like to ride them to work because they are very convenient.

Multiple issues: 'The bike are' shows subject-verb agreement and article misuse — 'bikes are' or 'the bike is' needed (ID 27 and 22). 'every some people like age to work' is ungrammatical (sentence structure, ID 26) and likely meant 'many people like to ride them to work.' 'It's very comfortable' should refer to plural 'they are very convenient.' Suggestions: use correct plural noun without wrong article ('bikes are'), use 'many people' for quantifier, use 'ride them to work' for action, and ensure pronoun agreement ('they are').