Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be sure to answer in the past tense and give a brief but clear expansion. Start with a direct topic sentence in past tense, then add one or two specific details (where you rode it, who gave it to you, or how often you used it). Keep it natural and no more than 3–4 short sentences. Use simple linking words like “and” or “so” if needed.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle that my parents gave me for my eighth birthday, and I rode it to school and around the neighborhood almost every day.

제안: State your opinion directly, then support it with two specific reasons using linking words (for example, “because” and “for instance”). Avoid vague phrases like “proper and accurate space”; instead name concrete factors such as lack of bike lanes, heavy traffic, or cultural preferences. Keep responses concise and natural.

예시: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country because there are few dedicated bike lanes and traffic is often heavy. For example, many people prefer cars or motorcycles for safety and convenience.

× Yes, I do have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The examiner asked about possession in the past ('when you were a child'), so the response should use past tense. Using present tense ('do have') conflicts with the time frame. To improve, match the verb tense to the time reference: use past simple ('had') for completed past situations.

× I think that bikes are not popular in my country because my country does not have the proper and accurate space for it.

✓ I think that bikes are not very popular in my country because we do not have proper spaces for them.

The sentence uses present tense appropriately for a general statement, but phrasing and word choice are awkward. 'Proper and accurate space' is incorrect collocation and singular 'space' with 'it' mismatches plural 'bikes'. Also repeating 'my country' is redundant. Improve by using 'proper spaces' (plural) and the pronoun 'them' to agree with 'bikes', and 'not very popular' sounds more natural. Use 'we' or 'my country' once to avoid repetition.