Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and add 1–2 specific supporting details. Keep your response natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences). For example, say whether you had a bike, when you got it, and a brief detail about how you used it. Use linking words if you add details (e.g., “Yes, I did. When I was seven,...”). Avoid unrelated greetings like “Hello.”

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it for my seventh birthday, and I rode it almost every day to visit friends and go to the park. Because I practiced a lot, I became confident riding on quiet streets.

제안: Answer directly and clearly, then provide specific reasons or examples to support your view. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., “country” not “county”) and linking words to connect ideas (e.g., “However,” “Recently,” “because”). Avoid short fragmented sentences and unclear phrases like “Ivy vehicle.”

예시: Yes, I think bikes have become very popular in my country recently because more people want cheaper and greener ways to travel. For example, many cities now have bike-sharing programs and protected bike lanes, so commuting by bike is much easier than before.

× Hello.

✓ Hello.

The response 'Hello.' is a greeting and not an answer to the examiner's question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' This is a sentence structure/response error because the student did not provide a relevant clause (subject + verb) answering the question. Suggestion: give a complete sentence that directly responds, e.g. 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.' or 'No, I did not have a bike when I was a child.' Keep tense consistent with the past question.

× No, in my county.

✓ No, in my country.

The student used 'county' but likely meant 'country'; this is a wrong word choice rather than grammar form but functions as an incorrect preposition/word use in context. Also the sentence fragment lacks a verb. Suggestion: use the correct word 'country' and form a full sentence: 'No, in my country they are not very popular.' or 'No, bicycles are not very popular in my country.' This uses correct preposition placement 'in my country.'

× Very popular recently.

✓ They have become very popular recently.

This fragment lacks a subject and auxiliary verb; it's an incomplete sentence. To fit the time reference 'recently' use present perfect: 'They have become very popular recently.' Suggestion: always include subject and appropriate auxiliary verb when describing changes over time.

× Ivy vehicle.

✓ Ivy vehicle.

The phrase 'Ivy vehicle' is unclear and likely a mispronunciation or typo. It does not form a grammatically correct noun phrase in English. If the student intended 'a new vehicle' or 'an e-vehicle' they should use the correct adjective and article: e.g. 'an electric vehicle' or 'a new vehicle.' Suggestion: choose the correct adjective and include an article: 'an electric vehicle.'