Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答はほとんど意味が通っていないため、まずは直接質問に答える簡潔な主文（例：No, I didn't.）を書き、その後で理由を明確かつ文法的に正しい文で付け加えてください。具体的には、接続詞（because, as, since）を使って理由をつなぎ、不要な言葉や不明瞭な表現（'sharp strokes'など）を避けてください。また、文は3文以内に収め、時制と語順に注意しましょう。

예시: No, I didn't. I didn't have a bike because my family lived in a very hilly area, so it wasn't practical. Also, during the COVID-19 pandemic we spent more time at home, so buying a bike wasn't a priority.

제안: 回答は断片的で具体性が不足しています。まずは直接的な意見文（Yes/NoまたはI think…）で始め、その後に理由や具体例を一つか二つ追加してください。地域差を述べるなら、どの地域で人気か、なぜか（交通手段、健康志向、通勤の利便性など）を明確に示しましょう。接続語（because, however, in some areas）を使って論理をつなげてください。

예시: I think bikes are fairly popular in my country, but popularity varies by region. For example, they are common in cities with good cycling infrastructure because people use them for short commutes, while rural areas see fewer cyclists due to longer distances and limited bike lanes.

× No, I didn't because.

✓ No, I didn't.

The sentence 'No, I didn't because.' is incomplete and lacks a subordinate clause after 'because'. 'Because' requires an explanation (e.g., 'because my family couldn't afford one'). Remove 'because' or add a full reason. Suggested improvement: provide a complete clause after 'because' or omit it to form a complete answer.

× I if in COVID where has a lot of sharp strokes?

✓ I don't know. During COVID there were many strict lockdowns.

This utterance is ungrammatical and seems to attempt to explain factors during COVID. 'I if in COVID where has a lot of sharp strokes?' contains incorrect word order and wrong vocabulary ('sharp strokes' should be 'strict lockdowns' or 'restrictions'). Rephrase using a clear subject and verb: 'During COVID there were many strict lockdowns.' or 'I think during COVID there were many strict restrictions.' Ensure correct tense (past) and clear noun choice.

× I partly agree with the opinion in Japan.

✓ I partly agree; in Japan, cycling is popular in some areas.

The original sentence is grammatically possible but awkward and lacks clarity. The phrase 'agree with the opinion in Japan' is vague. Clarify the referent and maintain parallel structure: 'I partly agree; in Japan, cycling is popular in some areas.' This uses correct preposition placement and specifies the comparison object.

× It tends to area.

✓ It tends to be popular in urban areas.

'Tends to area' is incorrect. 'Tend to' should be followed by a verb (e.g., 'tend to be') and 'area' needs an article or plural form and a clearer modifier. Use 'in urban areas' or 'in certain areas.' The corrected sentence uses the verb 'be' and the plural 'areas' with the preposition 'in.'