Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar, tense and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence using past tense: “Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.” Then add one or two specific supporting details (where you rode it, how often, or who you rode with) using linking words (e.g., “and”, “often”, “so”). Keep the answer natural and under five sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it almost every day around my neighborhood and to the local park, and I often practiced tricks with my friends. It helped me become more confident and active.

제안: Give a direct, confident topic sentence and follow with specific reasons or examples using linking words. Avoid filler sounds like “Uh” and vague answers. For example, state whether you think bikes are popular and then explain why (e.g., commuting, exercise, affordable) with one or two supporting details.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them to commute short distances and avoid traffic. Also, cycling is a common form of exercise, and bike-sharing programs in cities have made cycling more accessible.

× Yes, I have a bike when I am a in a childhood then.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student used present tense verbs ('have', 'am') to describe a past situation; this is a tense error. The correct tense for a past time (when you were a child) is the simple past: 'had' and 'was'. Also 'in a childhood' is ungrammatical — use 'when I was a child'. Suggestion: Use simple past for past events and the standard expression 'when I was a child'.

× Uh, maybe yes.

✓ Yes, maybe.

While not strictly ungrammatical, the original answer's word order is awkward for a short spoken response. Placing the modal of uncertainty ('maybe') before the affirmative ('yes') or using a full sentence ('Maybe they are') is clearer. Suggestion: Say 'Yes, maybe' or 'Maybe they are' to sound more natural and fit the question's present-tense context.