Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar, clarity and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence, use correct verb tenses and pronouns, and include one or two specific supporting details connected with linking words. Keep answers natural and within 2–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it to school with my friends almost every day, and we loved racing each other on the way there. Because the journey was short, biking felt fun and convenient.

제안: Clarify meaning and correct vocabulary. Give a clear topic sentence, then add specific, relevant details (who uses bikes, where, and why). Avoid unclear terms like “bag” and incorrect generalizations. Use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in urban areas where they are a cheap and convenient way to travel. However, in some rural areas fewer people own bikes because public transport is more common and some families cannot afford them.

× Yes, I had the one when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had one when I was a child.

The phrase 'the one' implies a specific item previously mentioned; here the speaker means a nonspecific bike. Use the singular indefinite 'one' without 'the' to indicate 'a bike'. Suggestion: Remove 'the' when referring to a non-specific single item ("I had one").

× I and my friends, we both have full back.

✓ My friends and I both had backpacks.

There are several issues: word order should put 'My friends and I' not 'I and my friends'; 'both' should modify two people having something; 'have' is present tense but context is past ('when I was a child'), so use past tense 'had'; 'full back' is incorrect for 'backpack(s)'. Use plural 'backpacks' if each person had one. Suggestion: Use correct subject order 'My friends and I', match tense to context, and use the correct noun 'backpacks'.

× We always ready to school to get to class.

✓ We were always ready to go to school and get to class.

The sentence lacks the verb 'were' for past state and misplaces 'ready'. Also 'to school to get to class' is awkward; include the verb 'go' and connect actions with 'and'. Use past tense 'were' to match 'when I was a child'. Suggestion: Include the correct auxiliary verb for adjective complements ('were ready') and add necessary verbs ('go').

× I like back very much.

✓ I liked biking very much.

'Back' is incorrect; likely intended 'bike' or 'biking'. Context is past ('when I was a child'), so use past tense 'liked'. Use the noun 'bike' or the gerund 'biking' for the activity; 'I liked biking very much' is natural. Suggestion: Choose the correct noun/gerund and match tense to context.

× Yes, it's very popular in my country, especially in the city.

✓ Yes, they are very popular in my country, especially in the cities.

The pronoun 'it' refers incorrectly to 'bikes' which is plural; use 'they' and pluralize 'city' to 'cities' when speaking generally. 'Are' is required for plural subject. Suggestion: Ensure pronoun and verb agree in number with the noun they refer to.

× Every families have a bag for their children or for theirselves of the parents.

✓ Every family has a bag for its children or for the parents themselves.

'Every' takes a singular noun: use 'family' not 'families'. Therefore use singular verb 'has'. 'Theirselves' is nonstandard; use 'the parents themselves' or 'them selves' (prefer 'the parents themselves'). Also 'its' is the possessive for 'family' but when referring to people 'the parents' is clearer. Suggestion: Use 'every family has' and 'the parents themselves' or 'its children'.

× But in the countryside or in the downtown, the poor people don't have bags.

✓ But in the countryside or downtown, poor people don't have bikes.

Context shows previous discussion about bikes, not 'bags'. 'The downtown' is awkward—use 'downtown'. Also 'the poor people' is unnatural; 'poor people' is preferred. The original noun 'bags' seems incorrect; replace with 'bikes'. Suggestion: Keep consistent nouns across sentences and use natural collocations ('in the countryside', 'downtown', 'poor people').

× They never know how to ride it.

✓ They never learned how to ride them.

'They' is plural, so the object should be 'them' (plural) not 'it'. Also past context requires 'learned' (past tense). Use 'ride them' to refer to bikes. Suggestion: Match pronoun number in object position and use past tense 'learned' to match context.