Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clear, grammatical, and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct basic grammar (articles, verb forms) and avoid repetition. For example, say how many bikes you had, what they looked like, who gave them to you, and when — using linking words such as “also” or “in addition.”

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. In fact, I owned two bikes: a small red one for riding around the park and a blue one for longer rides. My mother gave me the blue bike for my tenth birthday, and I rode it every weekend with my friends.

제안: Give a clear opinion, then support it with specific reasons and examples. Use linking words like “because,” “for example,” or “also.” Fix vocabulary and grammar (e.g., “popular,” “kids,” “in my country,” and avoid unclear phrases like “bikes are released”). Aim for 2–3 coherent sentences that explain why bikes are common and mention who uses them or where.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short journeys and exercise. For example, most children own a bike, and adults often cycle to work in cities with bike lanes. In addition, affordable prices and good cycling infrastructure make biking a common choice.

× 'Yes, I had bike in my childhood.'

✓ 'Yes, I had a bike in my childhood.'

'bike' is a singular countable noun and requires an article. Use 'a' before a singular, nonspecific noun. Suggestion: use 'a' or 'the' depending on context; here 'a bike' is correct.

× 'I was in, I was blue biked.'

✓ 'I had a blue bike.'

The original sentence is ungrammatical and mixes incorrect verbs and word order. Use the verb 'had' for possession and adjective before noun: 'a blue bike.' Suggestion: say 'I had a blue bike.' to express possession in the past.

× 'I was I had two bike in my childhood.'

✓ 'I had two bikes in my childhood.'

Plural noun 'bikes' must be used with the numeral 'two.' Also remove the redundant 'I was.' Maintain past tense 'had.' Suggestion: 'I had two bikes when I was a child.' for a more natural phrasing.

× 'My mom, my my mum gave me my birthday.'

✓ 'My mom, my mum, gave me [one] for my birthday.'

Sentence is fragmented and missing the object and preposition 'for' to indicate purpose/time: 'gave me (a bike) for my birthday.' Also remove duplicated 'my.' If the object is a bike, include it: 'gave me a bike for my birthday.' Suggestion: always include the thing given and use 'for my birthday.'

× 'Yes I do, pop bikes are popular in my country because every every kids has bike in.'

✓ 'Yes, I do. Bikes are popular in my country because every kid has a bike.'

Multiple issues: 'pop' is not the right word; 'popular' already conveys meaning. 'Kids' after 'every' should be singular 'every kid.' 'Has' must agree with singular subject. Include articles for singular countable nouns: 'a bike.' Also split into two sentences for clarity. Suggestion: use 'every kid has a bike' or 'all children have bikes.'

× 'Of course bikes are released. Interesting.'

✓ 'Of course, bikes are common and interesting.'

'Released' is incorrect here; likely meant 'popular' or 'common.' 'Interesting' as a fragment needs connection. Combine into a full sentence and choose correct adjective: 'bikes are common' or 'bikes are interesting.' Suggestion: say 'Of course, bikes are common and interesting.'