Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Старайтесь отвечать более прямо и естественно: начните с короткого топик‑предложения, затем добавьте 1–2 конкретных детали. Избегайте лексических ошибок (например, «write» вместо «ride») и числовых сокращений как «1». Следите за связками: используйте «because», «so», «and then» для логики ответа. Максимум 3–4 предложения будет лучше.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a bike from when I was about seven until my teens, and it was a birthday present from my parents. I loved riding it around the neighborhood because it gave me freedom, and I soon learned to ride confidently by practicing every day.

제안: Отвечайте более развёрнуто и конкретно: давайте причину, приведите пример и используйте связки. Поставьте артикли и правильные слова («means» вместо «mean»), избегайте шумных пауз «uh». Одно короткое топик‑предложение плюс 1–2 уточняющих предложения улучшат естественность.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in Russia, especially in the summer. Many people use them for short trips and exercise because public transport can be crowded, and city bike lanes make cycling convenient.

× Of course I did when I was a child for a long period of time.

✓ Of course I did when I was a child for a long period of time.

The sentence is grammatically acceptable in past tense; no change needed. However, it is slightly redundant to say 'when I was a child' and 'for a long period of time' together. Consider: 'Of course I did when I was a child' or 'I had one for a long time when I was a child.' Suggestion: simplify to avoid redundancy.

× That was a great dream of mine, to have one and to be able to write it freely.

✓ That was a great dream of mine: to have one and to be able to ride it freely.

The verb 'write' is incorrect in context; the intended action for using a bike is 'ride'. This is a vocabulary/word-choice error affecting sentence meaning and structure. Replace 'write' with 'ride' and use a colon for clarity. Suggestion: use 'ride' when talking about bicycles.

× And I was really happy when I got 1 as a present for my birthday and I was really excited to learn how to write it properly by myself.

✓ I was really happy when I got one as a present for my birthday, and I was excited to learn how to ride it properly by myself.

Two issues: the numeral '1' should be the word 'one', and again 'write' is incorrect; use 'ride' for bicycles. Also the sentence is long and repetitive ('really' twice); tightening improves style. Suggestion: write numbers as words in informal sentences and use 'ride' for bicycles.

× To my mind, bikes are actually very popular in my country.

✓ To my mind, bikes are actually very popular in my country.

This sentence is correct in present simple and matches the question about general popularity. No grammatical change required. Suggestion: optionally replace 'To my mind' with 'In my opinion' for more natural phrasing.

× I'm from Russia and especially during the summer season, bikes are uh, common mean of transport that people usually use to.

✓ I'm from Russia, and especially during the summer season, bikes are a common means of transport that people usually use.

Multiple issues: missing article 'a' before 'common', 'mean' should be plural noun 'means', and the sentence ends with the preposition 'to' which is unnecessary. Correct structure: 'a common means of transport that people usually use.' Suggestion: use 'a common means' and avoid ending sentences with redundant prepositions.