Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a direct, past-tense topic sentence and organize supporting details with linking words. Correct tense errors and reduce redundancy. Keep it within 3–4 clear sentences: state whether you had a bike, when and with whom you rode it, and one specific memory or feeling. Use linking words such as "so" or "because" to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it home from school with my friends on Fridays because we were excited about the weekend. Those rides felt carefree and fun, and we would race each other along the park road.

제안: Answer directly then give 2–3 specific reasons with clear linking words. Use correct vocabulary ("ride bikes" not "write back") and accurate grammar (present simple: "Bikes are popular"). Mention examples like shared bikes, payment by QR code, and convenience for short trips. Keep sentences concise and coherent.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. One reason is the widespread shared-bike system, which lets people scan a QR code on their phone to unlock a bike. This makes short trips around the city very convenient and affordable.

× Yes, I do have a bike and I really like to ride back with my friends after school I on Friday because we know the weekend was coming and in that time I feel life was more carefree and exciting.

✓ Yes, I had a bike and I really liked riding it with my friends after school on Fridays because we knew the weekend was coming and at that time life felt more carefree and exciting.

Multiple tense and verb-form issues: the question asked about childhood (past), so use past tense verbs (had, liked, knew, felt) rather than present. 'Ride back' is incorrect collocation; use 'riding it' or 'riding bikes'. 'I on Friday' is misplaced and ungrammatical; correct to 'on Fridays'. Use the gerund 'riding' after 'liked' to express habitual past action. Also change 'in that time' to 'at that time' for correct preposition usage. Suggestion: match tense to the time reference, use gerunds after verbs like 'like', and place time expressions correctly (e.g., 'on Fridays', 'at that time').

× I will say, so you always can say some people write back here in the road because in our country public transportation like bike is very convenient.

✓ I would say that many people ride bikes on the road here because in our country public transportation such as bike-sharing is very convenient.

Modal and tense: 'I will say' is unnatural here; 'I would say' is more appropriate for opinion. Word choice and verb errors: 'you always can say some people write back here in the road' is ungrammatical; likely meant 'many people ride bikes on the road here'. 'Write' is incorrect verb. Use 'ride' for bicycles. Replace 'like bike' with 'such as bike-sharing' or 'bicycles' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'would' for polite opinion, choose correct verbs for actions (ride), and use clear nouns for transport options.

× You can use a phone to scan the QR code to pay some change, get a ride back.

✓ You can use your phone to scan a QR code to pay the fare and get a ride.

Preposition and word choice issues: 'pay some change' is incorrect; native speakers say 'pay the fare' or 'pay with change'. 'Get a ride back' is awkward; use 'get a ride'. Also include possessive 'your phone'. Suggestion: use correct collocations for payment ('pay the fare') and clearer phrasing for rides ('get a ride').

× It's really convenient I would say.

✓ It's really convenient, I would say.

Punctuation and sentence boundary: the original is a run-on without a comma separating clauses. Grammatically the tense is fine, but punctuation is needed to separate the comment. Suggestion: add a comma to clarify pause and improve fluency.