Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: جوابك قصير وغير دقيق من حيث الزمن واستخدام الأزمنة. يجب أن تستخدم زمن الماضي عند الحديث عن الطفولة، وتضيف جملة موضوعية واحدة على الأقل مع تفاصيل توضيحية وربط منطقي. تجنب الأخطاء النحوية الصغيرة واحرص على طول إجابة لا يتجاوز 4-5 جمل.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about eight years old, and I used to ride it to my friend's house every weekend. It helped me become more confident and active, and I still remember learning to balance on it.

제안: إجابتك غير واضحة وتتضمن تكراراً وأخطاء في التكوين النحوي والربط. ابدأ بجملة مباشرة تعبر عن رأيك، ثم أضف سبباً محدداً واحداً أو مثالاً مع استخدام كلمات رابطة لتوضيح الفكرة. استخدم مفردات ملائمة مثل "popular", "common", "exercise", واهتم بصياغة الجمل بشكل صحيح.

예시: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country. Most people prefer cars or public transport because cities are busy and cycling lanes are limited, so many people avoid cycling for safety reasons.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked a past-time question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' so the student must reply using past tense. 'Have' is present tense and incorrect here; use the past-tense auxiliary 'did' with the base verb if needed (or simply 'Yes, I did.'). Suggestion: match the tense of your short answer to the question by using 'did' for past simple questions.

× Not the bike bikes it's more are more popular in my country because no one like to do like to do sports.

✓ No, bikes are not very popular in my country because few people like to do sports.

The original sentence has repeated words, wrong word order, subject-verb agreement errors, and awkward phrasing. Corrections: remove duplicate words ('bike bikes'), use correct negative structure ('No, bikes are not very popular'), ensure subject-verb agreement ('few people like' not 'no one like'), and avoid repetition ('like to do sports' instead of repeating). Suggestion: simplify the sentence, use correct negative form and correct plural agreement, and avoid repeating phrases.