Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and use correct grammar. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two clear supporting details. Correct verb forms, articles and word choice (e.g., 'work hard', 'buy', 'couldn't afford', 'give me'). Avoid unnecessary phrases like 'to balance that'. Keep within 2–4 sentences.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents worked very hard and couldn’t afford to buy one for me, so I didn’t learn to ride. I still don’t ride a bike now because I prefer walking or public transport.

제안: Answer directly, use correct comparative forms and accurate vocabulary. Start with a short yes/no sentence, then give specific reasons using linking words like 'because' and 'also'. Use correct adjectives (cheaper → inexpensive/cheap; 'ride' instead of 'row'). Fix articles and plural forms ('bikes are', 'the roads'). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and affordable for many people. Also, bikes are convenient for short trips on local roads, so lots of people use them for daily commutes.

× To balance that, I didn't have a bike from my childhood because my father and my mother works very hardly and so they can't vote me a bike and I don't ride a bike right now.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my father and mother worked very hard, so they couldn't buy me a bike, and I don't ride a bike now.

Multiple issues: 1) 'works' with plural subject 'my father and mother' is subject-verb agreement (ID 27) — correct form is 'worked' for past. 2) 'works very hardly' is incorrect adverb/adjective use (ID 13) and wrong meaning; use 'worked very hard'. 3) 'can't vote me a bike' is incorrect verb choice and modal tense (ID 4 and 26); intended meaning is 'couldn't buy me a bike' using past ability. 4) 'from my childhood' is incorrect preposition/phrase (ID 11); use 'when I was a child'. 5) 'I don't ride a bike right now' is acceptable but 'now' is more natural. Suggestions: use correct past tense for past events (worked, couldn't), use 'buy' for giving/purchasing, use 'worked very hard' for effort, and replace 'from my childhood' with 'when I was a child'. Please revise each clause to match past context and clear vocabulary.

× To be honestly yes, because bike is one of the most cheaper and affordable transport in my country and I think in our country our bikes is very comfortable transport to row right in our roads.

✓ To be honest, yes, because bikes are among the cheapest and most affordable forms of transport in my country, and I think our bikes are a very comfortable way to travel on our roads.

Multiple issues: 1) 'To be honestly' is incorrect adverb/adjective order (ID 13) and idiom; use 'To be honest'. 2) 'bike is' with singular article is wrong when speaking generally; this is a singular/plural and article problem (ID 1 and 22) — use 'bikes are'. 3) 'one of the most cheaper' mixes 'one of the most' with comparative 'cheaper' (ID 25); correct is 'among the cheapest' or 'one of the cheapest'. 4) 'affordable transport' needs count/phrase adjustment — use 'forms of transport' or 'modes of transport' (ID 14/11). 5) 'our bikes is' is subject-verb agreement error (ID 27) — use 'our bikes are'. 6) 'to row right in our roads' uses wrong verb and prepositions (ID 26 and 11); 'row' is wrong verb, use 'travel' or 'ride on our roads'. Suggestions: use 'To be honest' as set phrase, use plural 'bikes are' for general statements, use 'among the cheapest' for superlative, use 'forms of transport' and 'a comfortable way to travel on our roads' for natural phrasing.