Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Correct the grammar and pronunciation errors, be more concise and clear, and use a topic sentence followed by a brief supporting detail. Use linking words like “but” correctly. Avoid unclear phrases (e.g., “our eyes not able”).

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child, but I often played with my cousins and learned to ride with them. For example, we practised together in the park every weekend.

제안: Make the answer more concise and correct grammar (subject–verb agreement, remove redundancies). Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail with linking words like “because” or “for example.”

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many cities now have bike lanes. For example, most urban roads have dedicated cycling paths, and people often go cycling in rural routes at weekends and on holidays.

× No, our eyes not able to have one, but I used to play with my cousins and I learned how to ride a bike with them.

✓ No, we didn't have one, but I used to play with my cousins and I learned how to ride a bike with them.

Original uses 'our eyes not able to have one' which is incorrect pronoun and idiom. The speaker means 'we did not have one' (simple past negation). Use 'we' as subject and the past tense auxiliary 'didn't' plus base verb 'have'. This fixes pronoun reference and creates a grammatically correct negative past-tense sentence.

× Yes, they are so popular that we all we have now bike lanes in most of our roads, especially in the city and we have bike routes also in the country where lots of people always go biking especially during weekends and holidays.

✓ Yes, they are so popular that we now have bike lanes on most of our roads, especially in the city, and we also have bike routes in the countryside where many people go biking, especially on weekends and holidays.

Original sentence has several errors: 'we all we have now' duplicates subject and verb causing structure error and subject-verb flow problems. 'in most of our roads' should be 'on most of our roads' (preposition correction). 'in the country' is better 'in the countryside' for rural areas. 'lots of people always go biking' is awkward; 'many people go biking' is clearer and placing 'always' is unnecessary. Use 'on weekends and holidays' for correct preposition. The correction fixes subject-verb flow, prepositions, noun choice, and adverb placement to produce a natural, grammatical response.