Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer grammatically correct, concise, and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one brief supporting detail. Avoid filler words like “like” and fix tense/word order errors. For example, say you didn’t have a bike and explain why in one or two short sentences using linking words (because/so) and correct past tense.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my parents couldn’t afford one. As a result, I usually walked or used public transport to go to school.

제안: Give a direct opinion first, then support it with specific reasons and clear linking words. Correct grammar and remove fillers. Be specific about time or place if needed (e.g., in your village vs nationwide). Use one or two supporting details such as economic reasons, availability of public transport, or urban/rural differences.

예시: Generally, bikes aren’t very popular in my country because many people prefer public transport due to affordability and convenience. For example, in my village there were only one or two bikes because most people relied on buses and shared taxis.

× When I was child I didn't have a bike because due to like my parents can't afford at that time.

✓ When I was a child I didn't have a bike because my parents couldn't afford one at that time.

Errors: missing article before 'child' and incorrect pronoun/verb forms. 'When I was child' needs the article 'a child' (article error, ID 22 but primary is pronoun/word choice). 'because due to like' is redundant and informal; use 'because' or 'due to' but not both. 'my parents can't afford at that time' mixes present tense 'can't' with past time 'at that time' and omits the object 'one' for 'a bike'. Use past tense 'couldn't' and add 'one'. Suggestion: simplify to 'because my parents couldn't afford one at that time.'

× In my country and because like the at that time there was enough source of income so they mostly people travel through the public transit.

✓ In my country at that time there was enough income, so most people travelled by public transit.

Errors: incorrect and extra prepositions/words. 'and because like the at that time' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'at that time'. 'source of income' is awkward in this context; 'enough income' is clearer. 'they mostly people travel through the public transit' has wrong word order, pronoun issue, and preposition. Use 'most people travelled by public transit.' Also change tense to past 'travelled' to match 'at that time'. Suggestion: remove filler words ('like', 'and because') and use correct prepositions ('at that time', 'by public transit').

× There was like a just a few like a one or two bikes in our village.

✓ There were just a few bikes, maybe one or two, in our village.

Errors: quantifier and number agreement. 'There was' conflicts with plural 'a few bikes' — use plural verb 'were' (subject-verb agreement, ID 27). 'like a just a few like a one or two' contains redundant filler words and wrong articles before numbers. Use 'just a few' and 'one or two' without extra articles or 'like'. Also reorder for clarity. Suggestion: say 'There were just a few bikes, maybe one or two, in our village.'