Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is grammatical and relevant but too short and lacks detail. To improve, start with a direct topic sentence then add one or two specific supporting details (e.g., who gave it to you, what kind of bike it was, how you used it). Keep responses natural and avoid repetition. Use one linking word if adding a second detail.

예시: Yes, I did — I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought for me when I was seven. I rode it every day around the neighborhood to visit friends, and learning to balance on that bike gave me a lot of confidence.

제안: Your answer addresses the question and gives two reasons, but the phrasing is a bit mechanical and the ending is abrupt. Improve by using more natural linking words (for example, 'first' and 'second') and provide specific examples or a brief comparison to strengthen your point. Avoid filler phrases like 'that's it.' Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country. First, many people use them as an inexpensive and convenient way to commute short distances, especially in cities. Second, they are widely used for exercise and leisure — for example, weekend cycling groups and park bike paths are very common.

× Yes, I do think bikes are popular in my country because firstly, we use it for transportation and then secondly, it's a way for us to do an exercise and that's it.

✓ Yes, I do think bikes are popular in my country because, firstly, we use them for transportation and, secondly, they're a way for us to get exercise.

This sentence has a present tense issue combined with a singular/plural mismatch. 'Bikes' is plural, so the pronoun referring to them must be the plural 'them' (Singular and plural issue, ID 1). Also, 'it's a way for us to do an exercise' is awkward: use present tense contraction 'they're' to match the plural subject and a natural collocation 'get exercise' rather than 'do an exercise'. Suggestions: 1) Replace 'it' with 'them' to match the plural noun 'bikes'. 2) Use 'they're' to agree in number with 'bikes'. 3) Use 'get exercise' or 'exercise' rather than 'do an exercise' for natural usage. Ensure conjunctions and commas separate list items clearly (use commas after 'because', 'firstly', and 'secondly').