Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 句子時態與語法需修正，表達應更簡潔自然；補充更具體細節並使用連接詞使語句流暢。建議：將現在時改為過去時，將冗長片段拆成兩句，用連接詞如“so”或“but”並給出具體頻率或場景（例如週末、學校附近）。

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn't afford one, so I often borrowed my friend's bike to ride around the neighborhood on weekends.

제안: 用詞需更準確（例如 'commuter' 而非 'combinator'），內容可更具體並加連接詞以增加邏輯性。建議：加入具體例子或數字，說明在哪些城市或群體更常見，並使用連接詞如 'for example' 或 'because' 來連接觀點與原因。

예시: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country. For example, in big cities like Beijing and Shanghai many students and commuters use bikes because they are cheap and convenient for short trips.

× No, I don't have one.

✓ No, I didn't have one.

原句使用現在時（don't have）與面試官以過去時詢問的語境（Did you have...）不一致。當描述過去的情況時，應使用過去式，因此將 don't have 改為 didn't have。建議：在回答以過去時開頭的問題時，整句也用過去時（例如：I didn't have one / I didn't own one）。

× When I was a child, because my family couldn't offer bike sale, I sometimes borrowed my friend's bike on ride around the neighborhood.

✓ When I was a child, because my family couldn't afford to buy a bike, I sometimes borrowed my friend's bike to ride around the neighborhood.

原句結構與用詞有多處問題：1) couldn't offer bike sale 用法不自然且不合語法，應使用 couldn't afford to buy a bike（無力購買自行車）；2) on ride around the neighborhood 應為 to ride around the neighborhood（表示目的或用途）；3) 整句需保持過去時一致性。建議：用常見固定搭配 afford to do sth 表示負擔得起；表示騎車去某地用 to ride 或 rode（視時態）。

× Yes, bicycles are widely used in my country.

✓ Yes, bicycles are widely used in my country.

此句本身語法正確，無需更改。但後文有問題（見下句）。建議檢查整段連貫性與後續句子語法。

× You can see people riding bikes almost everywhere, especially in cities where cycling is an affordable and practical way for students and combinator to travel short distance.

✓ You can see people riding bikes almost everywhere, especially in cities where cycling is an affordable and practical way for students and commuters to travel short distances.

原句錯誤有：1) combinator 非正確詞彙，應為 commuters（通勤者）；2) travel short distance 應為 travel short distances 或 travel a short distance（數量與可數名詞一致）；3) 整句時態和用法維持現在一般時，故用 cycling is、to travel。建議：注意拼寫常用職業/身份詞（commuter），以及可數名詞單複數一致（short distances）。