Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer grammatically correct, more natural and slightly longer (up to 5 sentences). Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details (when you got it, what kind of bike, a memorable memory) using linking words to improve coherence.

예시: Yes, I did. My parents gave me a small red bicycle when I was about seven, and I still remember learning to ride it in our neighborhood park. It had training wheels at first, but within a few weeks I was riding without them, which made me feel very proud. That bike was one of my favorite childhood possessions.

제안: Give a stronger topic sentence and add specific supporting details and linking words to explain why bikes are popular (e.g., cost, traffic, environment). Provide an example or brief comparison to make the answer more informative and natural.

예시: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many people ride to work or to the market to avoid traffic and save money on fuel. In addition, cycling is becoming more common for environmental reasons, so you can see more bike lanes in larger cities.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The question asks about possession in the past ('Did you have a bike when you were a child?'), so the verb should be in the past tense. Using have (present) is inconsistent with the time frame. Use had to match the past context. Suggestion: Use past tense verbs when referring to past time frames (e.g., 'When I was a child, I had a bike.').

× When I was a child it was gifted by my parents.

✓ When I was a child, it was a gift from my parents.

The original uses a passive structure with 'gifted by' which is awkward here. There is also a tense/context issue: 'was gifted by my parents' is grammatically possible but unnatural in spoken English. Rephrasing to 'it was a gift from my parents' uses a simple past passive-like description that is more natural. Alternatively, 'my parents gave it to me' uses an active past verb. Suggestion: Prefer the clear active past ('My parents gave it to me') or the natural noun phrase ('it was a gift from my parents') for spoken responses.

× People prefer to go for jobs or shopping by bikes.

✓ People prefer to go to work or go shopping by bike.

There are several issues: 'go for jobs' is incorrect — use 'go to work' for commuting. Using two verbs in a row requires parallel structure: 'go to work or go shopping' or 'go to work or shopping' (first is clearer). 'By bikes' is incorrect because 'by' with transport typically uses singular noun without article or uses 'on' for bicycles: 'by bike' or 'on bikes'. Also 'prefer' takes the infinitive 'to go' or the gerund consistently. Suggestion: Use 'People prefer to go to work or go shopping by bike' or 'People prefer commuting by bike.'