Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct, use correct tense and natural phrasing, avoid filler words and keep answer within 1–3 clear sentences. Start with a topic sentence using past tense, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Also correct articles and plural/singular forms.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was a child, and I often rode it around my neighbourhood to visit friends and the park.

제안: Give a clear opinion followed by two specific reasons using linking words (for example, because/also). Use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement) and be slightly more precise about scale or examples. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I don't think bicycles are very popular in Malaysia because the hot and humid weather makes cycling uncomfortable for many people. Also, there is limited availability of bicycle shops and spare parts outside major cities, which discourages people from buying bikes.

× There you are. Yes, I do have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present simple ('I do have') with a past time expression ('when I was a child'). Use past tense 'had' to match the past time reference. Suggestion: use past tense consistently for past events ('I had a bike when I was a child').

× What? And I use it to stroll all around my neighborhoods.

✓ I used it to stroll all around my neighbourhood.

The verb 'use' is in present tense while the context refers to a past habit; use the past tense 'used'. 'Stroll' after 'used to' can remain base form, but here 'used' as past simple is appropriate with 'to' indicating purpose. Also 'neighborhoods' should be singular or omitted; 'neighbourhood' is natural. Suggestion: match tense to past ('I used it to stroll around my neighbourhood').

× I think bikes are not really popular in my country, Malaysia, because the weather is hot.

✓ I think bikes are not very popular in my country, Malaysia, because the weather is hot.

The sentence uses present tense appropriately for a general statement, but 'not really popular' is informal; replace with 'not very popular' for clearer English. No tense change needed; suggestion: use 'not very popular' to sound more natural.

× And my country rarely have bicycle parts.

✓ And my country rarely has bicycle parts available.

The subject 'my country' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' not 'have'. Also add 'available' to clarify meaning. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement ('my country has').