Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Expand your answer with a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Mention specific memories or reasons to make it more vivid and natural. Use a linking word if you add more than one detail.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was eight, and I used it to ride to the park every afternoon. Because the neighborhood was quiet, I quickly learned to ride without training wheels and made many friends while cycling.

제안: Give a fuller response with a topic sentence and at least one specific reason or example. Use linking words (for example, because, therefore) to connect ideas and avoid repeating the word "bike" too often.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many people use bicycles to commute short distances because they are cheap and convenient, and in some cities there are dedicated bike lanes and shared bike programs that encourage cycling.

× Yes, I did.

✓ Yes, I did.

The sentence correctly answers the past-tense question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' using the appropriate short response. No grammar problem from the provided list applies.

× Yes, because many people have bikes.

✓ Yes, because many people have bikes.

The sentence correctly answers the present-tense question 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' The clause 'many people have bikes' is grammatically correct and matches the present-tense context. No grammar problem from the provided list applies.