Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise, use correct tense and clearer reasons. Start with a direct topic sentence (I didn’t have a bike as a child.), then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and filler words, and keep it within 2–4 sentences. Also correct grammar: use past tense consistently and natural phrases (e.g., “I didn’t have enough space at home” instead of “I live in a very small house”).

예시: I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Mainly because our apartment was very small, so there wasn’t space to store one. Also, I wasn’t very interested in cycling or other forms of exercise at that time.

제안: Answer directly and give clearer, specific reasons with linking words. Begin with a clear opinion (Yes/No and why), then support with 1–2 details such as climate, infrastructure or culture. Use correct phrasing (e.g., “In my country, bikes aren’t very popular because public transport and cars are more convenient” ). Avoid vague or incorrect expressions like “my country is all have a very large space.”

예시: No, bikes aren’t very popular in my country. Most people prefer public transport or private cars because cities are spread out and distances are long, so cycling is often impractical. In addition, there is limited cycling infrastructure in many areas, which discourages people from using bikes for daily travel.

× I do not have a bike when I was a child because I live in a very small house and I don't have the place to put a bike in my house and also I don't like going I'm I'm not doing exercise so I don't have a bike.

✓ I did not have a bike when I was a child because we lived in a very small house and I did not have a place to keep a bike, and I did not like exercising, so I did not have a bike.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses (e.g., 'do not have' with 'when I was a child'). Use past tense throughout to describe past situations. Also adjust phrasing for natural English: 'live' -> 'lived', 'don't have the place to put' -> 'did not have a place to keep', and 'I don't like going I'm I'm not doing exercise' -> 'I did not like exercising'. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent (past) when describing past events and simplify redundant phrases.

× I don't think bike is popular in my country because my country is all have a very large space and most of us are traveling by public transportation or driving our own car, so it's very exhausting to use the bike to travel.

✓ I don't think bikes are popular in my country because my country has a lot of open space, and most of us travel by public transportation or drive our own cars, so it is inconvenient to use a bike for travel.

Several errors: 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' when speaking generally. 'My country is all have a very large space' is incorrect — use 'my country has a lot of open space' or similar. 'Most of us are traveling' should be present simple 'most of us travel' for habitual action. 'Drive our own car' should be plural 'drive our own cars' to agree with plural subject. 'It's very exhausting to use the bike to travel' is awkward; 'inconvenient to use a bike for travel' is clearer. Suggestion: Use plural nouns for general statements, correct verb forms for habitual actions, and choose clearer adjectives (inconvenient) for intended meaning.