Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar, and add one or two specific supporting details linked coherently. Use a clear topic sentence, then one supporting detail with a linking phrase. Also avoid repetition and fix word order and articles.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike when I was about seven, and I often rode it to my friends’ houses and to the local park. For example, every Saturday morning we would race along the tree-lined path near my home, which was great fun and helped me improve my balance.

제안: Answer directly with correct subject-verb agreement, then provide a specific reason and one concrete example or comparison. Use linking words like "because" or "for example" to make your point coherent and avoid vague phrasing.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many children use them to travel short distances and for leisure. For example, in my neighborhood kids often ride to school or meet up for informal races on weekends, partly because biking is inexpensive and good exercise.

× Yes I did have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

Use simple past rather than 'did' + base verb in affirmative sentences. 'Did' is used for questions and negatives; in affirmative past statements use the past form 'had'. Also add a comma after 'Yes' for clarity.

× I remember riding it with my friends friends house and to the local park.

✓ I remember riding it with my friends to their house and to the local park.

The original sentence repeats 'friends' and has unclear structure. Clarify possession by using 'their house' to indicate friends' house. Ensure parallel structure when listing places: 'to their house and to the local park.' This fixes redundancy and improves clarity.

× Yes, it is popular because a lot of children in our country rode a bike to their friend's house or to race in the road.

✓ Yes, they are popular because many children in our country ride bikes to their friends' houses or to race on the road.

Subject 'bikes' is plural, so use plural pronoun 'they' and plural verb 'are' (third person plural). The time frame implied is general/habitual, so use present simple 'ride' rather than past 'rode.' Use plural 'bikes' and 'friends' houses' for consistency and possessive plural form 'friends\'' when referring to multiple friends. Use 'on the road' for correct preposition. 'A lot of' can be replaced with 'many' for more natural phrasing.