Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar and fluency: use consistent tense, avoid filler words, and make sentences more concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one brief supporting detail using a linking word. Also correct verb forms (e.g., ‘rode’ or ‘used to ride’) and remove hesitation sounds like “uh.”

예시: Yes. I used to have a bicycle when I was a child. I rode it to school every day because it was faster than walking, so I could save time in the morning.

제안: Make the answer more natural and specific: give a clear opinion, explain reasons with specific details, avoid repetition and filler words, and use correct phrasing (e.g., “riding a bike” and “traffic congestion”). Use a linking word to connect opinion and reason.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because traffic congestion is severe in many cities. For example, many people prefer cycling for short trips since it is quicker and cheaper than driving.

× When I was a kid, I had a bicycle and I usually ride my bicycle from home to school because, uh, with my bike it will be, it was faster.

✓ When I was a kid, I had a bicycle and I usually rode my bicycle from home to school because it was faster.

The sentence mixes past and present tense. The context 'When I was a kid' requires past tense consistently. 'Usually ride' should be past 'usually rode'. Remove unnecessary filler 'will be, it was' and keep 'it was faster.' Use past simple for habitual actions in the past.

× From my perspective, in my country bikes are quite popular.

✓ From my perspective, in my country bikes are quite popular.

This sentence is correct; no change needed. It uses present simple correctly to describe a general truth. No -ing verb issue applies.

× The reason is uh, with uh, riding bike it's easier and better than the cars because in my country the traffic is a common thing.

✓ The reason is that riding a bike is easier and better than driving a car because traffic is common in my country.

Several article and noun usage errors: use 'that' to introduce a clause, 'a bike' (singular countable) instead of 'bike', and compare activities correctly: 'driving a car' instead of 'the cars.' Also 'the traffic is a common thing' is awkward; use 'traffic is common' or 'traffic congestion is common.' This correction fixes article errors and improves idiomatic phrasing.