Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Bu soruya doğrudan cevap verin ve kısa bir kişisel bilgi ekleyin. Örneğin geçmiş zaman kullanarak bisikletinizin olup olmadığını belirtin, ardından bir neden veya kısa bir detay verin. Cümle sayısını 2-3'te tutun ve basit bağlaçlar (because, so, but) kullanın.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used it to ride to my neighbor's house every day because it was too far to walk, and I remember practicing until I felt confident.

제안: Soruyu doğrudan yorumlayın ve nedenlerini kısaça açıklayın. Ülkelerden bahsederken mantıklı bağlam verin (örneğin kıyaslama). Ayrıca dilbilgisiye dikkat ederek tam cümleler kurun ve birkaç destekleyici detay ekleyin.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities with good bike lanes. For example, cities with many students and short commutes tend to have more cyclists, and governments that invest in cycling infrastructure see higher cycling rates.

× Yes, Canada, Italia and Finnish.

✓ Yes, Canada, Italy and Finland.

The student listed country names and one adjective incorrectly. 'Italia' is Italian name but in English use 'Italy' (proper noun). 'Finnish' is an adjective meaning 'from Finland'; the country name should be the noun 'Finland'. Also items in a list of countries are plural nouns and require consistent noun forms. Suggestion: use the English country names and maintain noun forms when listing countries (e.g., 'Canada, Italy and Finland').