Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the response grammatically correct, more natural, and add a brief supporting detail. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then one short detail using a linking word. Keep it under five sentences.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about seven, and I rode it to visit my friends in the neighborhood.

제안: Use correct grammar and clearer vocabulary, avoid repetition, and give a specific reason or example. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two concise supporting details linked with words like 'because' or 'for example'.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and practical for short trips. For example, many children and students cycle to school, and my cousin uses a bicycle to commute to work.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked about possession in the past ('Did you have a bike when you were a child?'), so the student should use the past tense. Using 'have' (present) is incorrect. Use the past auxiliary 'did' with the base verb: 'Yes, I did.' Alternatively, 'Yes, I had.' would also be correct. Avoid mixing present tense with a past-time question.

× Yes actually many many Childs are riding back riding bike today and I can say that bike is popular in my country.

✓ Yes, actually many children are riding bikes today, and I can say that bikes are popular in my country.

'Childs' is incorrect plural form; the correct plural of 'child' is 'children'. 'Bike' should be plural when referring to many people riding them: 'bikes'. The phrase 'riding back riding bike' is ungrammatical and likely a repetition or wrong word order; 'are riding bikes' is the correct structure. Also 'bike is popular' should be plural agreement with 'bikes are popular' when speaking generally about many bikes. Ensure noun plurals match the meaning and subject-verb agreement.

× Also my cousin have a bike.

✓ Also my cousin has a bike.

The subject 'my cousin' is singular, so the verb must be the third-person singular form 'has', not 'have'. This is a subject-verb agreement error. For improvement, identify the subject number and choose the correct verb form (he/she/it -> verb+s in present simple).