Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant and direct, but filled with hesitations ("uh") and slightly wordy. To improve, remove filler words, use a clear topic sentence, and add one brief supporting detail (e.g., who gave it to you or how you used it). Keep it under five sentences and use a linking word if you add more than one detail.

예시: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small red bicycle when I was seven, and I used it to ride to school and play with friends on weekends.

제안: Your main idea is understandable, but the delivery is hesitant and the sentence is ungrammatical. Improve by giving a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + reason), then support it with a specific reason and a linking word. Avoid repeating words and use correct noun forms ("traffic" not "traffics"). Keep answers concise and coherent.

예시: No, I don't think bikes are very popular because traffic is heavy and roads are unsafe for cyclists, so most people prefer cars or public transport.

× Yes, I did, uh, have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.

The student used 'did' and then the base verb 'have' in a spoken repetition; this is redundant. For past simple questions and answers, use 'did' + base verb in question, and the short answer 'Yes, I did.' or a full sentence with past tense 'I had.' Use one clear past form: either the short answer or the full past-tense sentence. Suggestion: say 'Yes, I did.' or 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.'

× Uh, no, I don't, uh, I think, uh, in our traffic, uh, uh, in our traffics, it's a terrible to go by the bike.

✓ Uh, no, I don't. I think traffic here is terrible for riding a bike.

Multiple issues: 'I don't' is short for 'I don't think' but was left incomplete; 'in our traffics' is incorrect because 'traffic' is an uncountable noun and does not take a plural form; 'it's a terrible to go by the bike' is ungrammatical—'terrible' needs a noun or adverbial phrase and 'by the bike' is unnatural. The corrected sentence uses 'traffic' (uncountable) and the gerund 'riding a bike' to express the activity. Suggestion: use 'I don't think' fully or 'I don't' as a short answer, use uncountable 'traffic', and use 'for' + gerund ('for riding a bike') or 'to ride a bike.'