Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No), then give one or two specific supporting details in correct tense and simple sentences. Avoid repetition and unclear age references. Use linking words like “because” or “so” correctly. Correct verb tenses (use past for childhood) and simpler phrasing about rules (e.g., age limits).

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I was not allowed to ride because the law requires people to be at least 18 to ride alone. I only received my first bike as a gift from my father when I turned 19.

제안: Answer directly and organize your response: give a clear opinion, then one or two specific reasons or examples. Use linking words (for example, because, also) and more precise vocabulary (commute, short trips, affordable). Avoid vague or repeated phrases. Keep to 2–3 sentences and correct grammar (present simple for general facts).

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in India. They are affordable and convenient for short trips and commuting in busy cities, and many people choose them because fuel and maintenance costs are lower than for cars.

× No, I don't have a bike in my childhood because I have a teenage and in the in the below this in below the 18 years old, the government said that don't don't park without a license after 9 after 19 we have a bike. I, I, my father gifted me a bike. So in my childhood I don't have a bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike in my childhood because I was a teenager and under 18 years old, the government said you cannot ride without a license. After I turned 19, I had a bike because my father gifted it to me. So in my childhood I didn't have a bike.

Multiple tense and verb form errors: the sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. Use past simple for events in childhood (didn't have, was, turned, gifted). 'I have a teenage' is incorrect; use 'I was a teenager'. 'Below the 18 years old' should be 'under 18 years old'. 'Don't park without a license' is wrong verb and form; use 'cannot ride without a license' or 'you cannot ride without a license'. Also clarify sequence: 'After I turned 19' and 'my father gifted it to me'. Suggestions: keep past tense consistently for past events, use correct age expressions ('under 18', 'turned 19'), and use appropriate verbs ('ride' not 'park', 'gifted it to me').

× Well, India is a diverse country and in India there are many, there are many various transport like a bike or like a public transport or as various as well as a car.

✓ Well, India is a diverse country and there are many types of transport, such as bikes, public transport, and cars.

Awkward repetition and incorrect phrasing: 'there are many, there are many various transport' is repetitive; use 'there are many types of transport'. 'Like a bike or like a public transport or as various as well as a car' uses incorrect connectors and singular/plural forms. Use 'such as' to list examples and plural nouns for categories ('bikes', 'cars', 'public transport'). Suggestions: avoid repetition, use 'such as' for examples, and match singular/plural correctly.

× So from my point of view, bikes are very important in my country as well as popular because without bike we can't reach, we can't decide short distance.

✓ So from my point of view, bikes are very important and popular in my country because without a bike we can't reach short distances easily.

Verb and article errors: 'without bike' needs the article 'a bike'. 'We can't reach, we can't decide short distance' is incorrect: 'reach short distances' is the intended meaning; 'decide' is wrong verb. Maintain present simple for general statements ('are', 'can't'). Also add an adverb 'easily' for clarity. Suggestions: use correct verbs ('reach'), include articles where necessary ('a bike'), and keep consistent tense for general truths.