Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details with correct verb forms and natural expressions. Avoid filler sounds (umm) and repetition. Use linking words like "because" or "so" correctly and keep the answer to no more than 3–4 sentences.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I was too afraid of falling, so my parents never taught me how to ride. As a result, I learned to use public transport instead.

제안: Avoid double negatives and improve clarity: give a clear opinion first, then one or two specific reasons with linking words (e.g., "because", "because of"). Use plural forms and correct articles (e.g., "European countries", "bike lanes"). Remove fillers and keep sentences well-structured.

예시: No, bikes aren't very popular in Korea compared with European countries because we lack separate bike lanes and safe cycling infrastructure. For this reason, many people prefer cars or public transport instead.

× No, I didn't have bike when I was child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

Missing an article before a singular countable noun and missing article before 'child'. Use 'a' before 'bike' and 'a child' to make grammatically correct countable noun phrases. Suggestion: include appropriate articles for singular countable nouns.

× Umm, because I feel, I remember that I was very afraid of riding the bike, so I didn't want to learn how to ride a bike at that moment.

✓ Umm, I remember that I was very afraid of riding a bike, so I didn't want to learn how to ride one at that time.

Redundant tense mixing and article use: 'I feel' is unnecessary and conflicts with 'I remember' (past). 'the bike' implies a specific bike; use 'a bike' or 'one'. 'at that moment' is acceptable but 'at that time' is more natural. Suggestion: remove 'I feel' to keep past recollection and use 'a bike' or 'one'.

× I don't think bikes are not that popular in Korea compared to European country.

✓ I don't think bikes are that popular in Korea compared to European countries.

Double negation: 'I don't think' followed by 'not' creates confusion; remove 'not'. Also 'European country' should be plural 'European countries' when making a general comparison. Suggestion: avoid double negatives and match singular/plural when generalizing.

× Umm, the reason why is that umm I think compared to European country we don't have any separate bike lane or Rd. so that's why it's not that popular.

✓ Umm, the reason is that, compared to European countries, we don't have separate bike lanes or roads, so that's why they're not that popular.

Preposition and article/number errors: 'compared to European country' should be 'compared to European countries'. 'any separate bike lane or Rd.' is awkward; use plural 'bike lanes or roads'. Abbreviations like 'Rd.' are informal; write 'roads'. Also maintain subject agreement: 'they're not that popular' refers to 'bikes'. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general statements, avoid informal abbreviations, and ensure subject agreement.