Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Clarify tense and word choice, avoid contradictions, remove irrelevant technical details, and use linking words to make the answer coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence about whether you had a bike, then add one or two specific supporting details (type of bike, how you used it, a brief memory). Keep responses natural and within 3–4 sentences.

예시: No, I didn’t have a motorbike as a child, but I did have a small bicycle with training wheels that I rode every day. It was bright red and had a little bell, which made it fun to ride around my neighborhood. I remember learning to balance on it with the help of my older cousin, and we used to race to the park on weekends.

제안: Reduce hesitation words (uh, well), use plural/singular correctly, and provide a specific reason with an example. Begin with a clear opinion, then use linking words (because, so, for example) to give one or two concise supporting points such as reasons, statistics, or a short personal observation.

예시: Yes, motorcycles are very popular in my country because they are faster and cheaper than cars in heavy traffic. For example, many commuters use motorbikes to cut travel time during rush hour, and small businesses often rely on them for quick deliveries.

× No, I don't used to have any bike when I was a child, but I used to have a bicycle which I used to ride a lot.

✓ No, I didn't use to have a bike when I was a child, but I used to have a bicycle which I rode a lot.

The negative past habit should use 'didn't use to' not 'don't used to' (past tense with auxiliary did + base verb). Also, after stating a past habitual action with 'used to', the following clause describing the repeated action is better as past simple 'I rode' rather than repeating 'used to'. Use 'a bike' instead of 'any bike' for a simple negative habit reference. Suggestion: use 'didn't use to' for past negative habitual actions and use past simple for describing habitual actions when already established.

× It had four wheels, 12UH-3 at the back of the cycle and 1 is in front.

✓ It had four wheels: two at the back of the cycle and one in front.

The original uses unclear '12UH-3' and mixes digits with words. Use words for small numbers for clarity and correct article use: 'one' not '1 is'. Also 'two at the back' matches 'four wheels' context. Suggestion: write small numbers as words and ensure clarity in describing positions ('two at the back and one in front').

× Uh, well yes, bike is popular because it helps a lot to skip traffic uh in our country we have a lot of traffic.

✓ Uh, well yes, bikes are popular because they help a lot to avoid traffic; in our country we have a lot of traffic.

Use plural 'bikes' with plural verb 'are' for general statements. 'It helps' is singular; change to 'they help' to agree with 'bikes'. Use 'avoid' rather than 'skip' for traffic. Also separate clauses for clarity. Suggestion: make the subject and verb agree in number and use appropriate verbs ('avoid traffic').

× We have vehicles uh everywhere, but with motorbike, it helps a lot to easily go from one place to another and yes.

✓ We have vehicles everywhere, but with a motorbike it is much easier to go from one place to another.

Use the article 'a motorbike' when speaking generally about one vehicle type. Replace 'it helps a lot to easily go' with 'it is much easier to go' for natural English and correct structure. Remove filler 'and yes'. Suggestion: use correct articles, avoid awkward word order ('easier to go' instead of 'helps... to easily go'), and reduce fillers for clarity.