Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答过于简短，未直接展开细节或使用衔接词。建议在回答中先用一句主题句肯定或否定，然后补充1–2句具体细节（例如什么时候获得、谁送的、经常骑去哪里、对你的影响），并在句子之间用连接词如“because”、“so”或“which”使表达连贯。注意保持不超过5句且语言自然。

예시: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven, and I rode it almost every day to visit my friends in the neighborhood. Because I practiced a lot, I became much more confident and independent.

제안: 回答仅有单词，缺少具体观点和支持细节。建议先给出一个简短的立场句，然后用一到两句具体原因或例子支持，如城市通勤、环保、城市设施或年龄群的偏好，并使用连接词如“because”、“for example”或“so”。保持句子自然并控制在最多五句。

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, in cities you can see bike lanes and shared-bike services that make cycling convenient.

× Yes.

✓ Yes.

经检查，学生回答“Yes.”在此语境中是简短肯定回答，符合口语习惯，没有违反所列的语法问题类型，因此无需修改。

× Yes.

✓ Yes.

经检查，学生回答“Yes.”在此语境中是简短肯定回答，符合口语习惯，没有违反所列的语法问题类型，因此无需修改。