Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and accurate: start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb tenses, remove repetitions, and add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and word order. For example, say whether you had a bike, who you rode with, and a specific memory or frequency.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my parents and siblings, and we used to cycle to the local park every weekend.

제안: Give a direct answer, then support it with a clear reason and a specific example. Use correct comparisons and avoid filler words like “etcetera.” Use linking words like “because” and “for example.”

예시: Yes, bikes are popular in my country because many people find them cheaper and more convenient than motorcycles. For example, students and office workers often cycle short distances to avoid traffic and save on fuel.

× Yes, when I when I a child I have a bike to strolling around my my city.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I had a bike to stroll around my city.

Errors: repetition ('when I when I', 'my my'), wrong tense (present 'have' instead of past 'had'), incorrect structure 'a bike to strolling' should use base verb after 'to'. This fits Sentence structure errors (26) and Past tense issue (5) but per instructions only include listed type; here major issue is sentence structure. Suggestion: remove duplicates, use past tense for past time reference, and use infinitive 'to stroll' or gerund without 'to' (e.g., 'for strolling').

× I study around with a bike together with my family like my father, my mom and my and my siblings.

✓ I used to ride my bike around with my family, like my father, my mother and my siblings.

Errors: incorrect verb 'study' for riding, awkward phrase 'study around with a bike', repetition 'my and my', tense and structure incorrect for past habitual action. Replace with 'used to ride' to indicate past habit, use 'mother' instead of informal 'mom' for consistency, and remove duplicate 'my'. Suggestion: use 'used to' or past simple ('I rode') and list family members without repetition.

× Yeah, bikes are popular in my country because people, most people prefer to use bikes than than motor, motorcycle and etcetera.

✓ Yes, bicycles are popular in my country because most people prefer to use bikes rather than motorcycles, etcetera.

Errors: 'prefer to use X than Y' should be 'prefer X rather than Y' or 'prefer to X rather than Y', duplicate 'than than', word choice 'motor, motorcycle' is redundant, informal 'etcetera' can be 'etc.' Preposition/comparison structure issue falls under Incorrect use of prepositions (11) and Comparative errors but per list use 11. Suggestion: use 'rather than' for comparison, remove duplicates, and use correct plural 'motorcycles'.