Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise, correct grammar, and include a clear topic sentence plus a brief reason with linking words. Correct article use and verb forms, and avoid repetition. For example, start with a direct answer, then add one clear reason using a linking word such as "because" or "since."

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because in my country people can only get a motorcycle license at 18. As a result, most teenagers either walk or use public transport.

제안: Give a direct, natural topic sentence, then support it with specific, well-linked details. Use correct noun forms and avoid filler words like "well." Mention proportions or reasons if possible and use linking words such as "however," "also," or "for example."

예시: Yes, motorcycles are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for busy city streets. However, some people prefer cars for comfort, and others use buses and trains for longer trips.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was child as in our country the minimum age required to have a a bike is 18.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, because in our country the minimum age required to have a bike is 18.

Errors: missing article before 'child', extra 'a', run-on sentence without proper connector. Use 'a child' for countable noun and remove duplicate 'a'. Connect clauses with 'because' and add a comma for clarity. Suggestion: include the article 'a' before 'child', delete the extra 'a', and use a coordinating connector ('because') to join the explanation. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Yes, usually many people prefer to go to motorcycle.

✓ Yes, usually many people prefer to ride motorcycles.

'Go to motorcycle' is ungrammatical: 'ride' is the correct verb for using a motorcycle and 'motorcycle' should be plural when speaking generally. Also 'to' is unnecessary. Suggestion: use 'ride motorcycles' or 'use motorcycles' for general statements. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Well, some prefer to travel with the help of car or by public transport.

✓ Well, some prefer to travel by car or by public transport.

'With the help of car' is incorrect. Use the preposition 'by' with modes of transport and include the article 'a' if singular ('by a car'), but for general statements use 'by car'. Suggestion: use 'by car' and keep parallel structure 'by car or by public transport'. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Well, I used to travel with the car.

✓ Well, I used to travel by car.

'With the car' is awkward and 'the car' implies a specific car; for habitual mode of transport use 'by car'. Also 'used to' correctly indicates past habitual action. Suggestion: replace 'used to travel with the car' with 'used to travel by car'. Grammar problem type ID:22