Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 질문을 단순히 반복하지 말고 직접적으로 대답하세요. 질문에 대한 명확한 주제문을 제시하고, 필요하면 하나 또는 두 개의 구체적인 세부사항(예: 몇 살 때, 누구에게서 받았는지, 자주 탔는지)을 연결어(예: "when I was...", "for example", "because")와 함께 덧붙이세요. 답변은 최대 5문장 내로 유지하고 중복 표현을 피하세요.

예시: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was six years old and I rode it almost every day after school. For example, I used to practice riding around the neighborhood park with my older brother. Because I rode so often, I became very confident and could ride long distances by the time I was ten.

제안: 명확한 주제문으로 시작하고 'umm' 같은 망설임 표현은 줄이세요. 구체적인 이유나 예시를 하나 이상 제시해 대답을 풍부하게 하세요(예: 도시별 인기 차이, 자전거 도로 확충, 통근이나 여가 목적 등). 연결어(예: "because", "for example", "especially")를 사용해 논리적으로 이어가세요.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in Korea, especially in cities with good bicycle paths. For example, many people use bikes for commuting short distances and students often ride to school. Because the government has improved cycle lanes in recent years, more families also enjoy cycling for leisure on weekends.

× Yes, in Korea, umm, many people are like you ride a bike.

✓ Yes, in Korea, umm, many people, like you, ride bikes.

The sentence misuses the pronoun phrase 'like you' and has pluralization issues. 'Like you' should be set off by commas as a parenthetical phrase if it addresses the listener, and the noun 'bike' should be plural ('bikes') when referring to many people. Also moving 'ride' to follow the subject makes the sentence grammatically correct. Suggested improvement: set off 'like you' with commas when used as an aside and use plural nouns after quantifiers such as 'many' (e.g., 'many people ride bikes').