Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Use correct tense and produce a clear topic sentence with one or two supporting details. Start with a correct past-tense sentence (e.g., "Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.") and optionally add one brief detail about it (color, how you used it, or who gave it to you). Keep it natural and concise (no more than 3–4 sentences) and avoid redundancy.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle that my parents bought for me on my seventh birthday, and I rode it every day to visit friends in the neighborhood.

제안: Make the response grammatically correct and give specific supporting details with linking words. Start with a clear topic sentence ("Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country.") then add reasons using linking phrases like "because" or "for example." Mention specific groups or situations (commuting, shopping, exercise) and one brief example or comparison to strengthen your answer.

예시: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient. For example, many people use bikes to commute to work in cities, others use them for shopping in local markets, and many young people ride regularly for exercise.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence uses present tense 'have' while referring to a past time expression 'when I was a child'. This is a tense mismatch. Use past simple 'had' to match the past time. Suggestion: use past tense for actions or states that occurred in the past (I had, I lived, I played).

× Yes, the bicycle are very popular in my country.

✓ Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country.

The subject and verb do not agree. 'The bicycle' (singular) requires 'is', while 'are' requires a plural subject. The intended meaning refers generally to bicycles, so use the plural noun 'bicycles' with 'are'. Alternatively, keep singular and change verb: 'The bicycle is very popular' for a specific bicycle. For general statements, use plural nouns: 'Bicycles are very popular.'

× A lot of people use them, commute and shopping and exercise each.

✓ A lot of people use them to commute, shop, and exercise.

The original sentence lists verbs inconsistently and ends with the stray word 'each'. Parallel structure requires matching verb forms: use infinitive or base forms consistently ('to commute, to shop, and to exercise' or more naturally 'to commute, shop, and exercise'). Remove 'each' because it is unnecessary and incorrect here. Also add 'to' before the first verb or omit it and keep base forms for parallelism.